[Report This]Date: June 14 2023 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 17 - The Suburban Goddess II
I really liked Rasha's character. She sounded like a very intriguing person. Hopefully, we see a lot more of her later in the story 🙂.
Author's Response:
I think I'm going to develop her character, she seems like she's going to be fun to write and I expect to put her into more chapters in the future.
[Report This]Date: June 13 2023 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 17 - The Suburban Goddess II
Amazing chapter as always! Thank you so much for making these they’re amazing; You’re the author I always check for when I visit this site! Also omg I love so many of the new characters already, Rasha is amazing, and I’m curious how/if the wine club girls will join more too. I imagine the knowing circle will stay small, hopefully they all find interesting ways to encounter the micros or even nanos without realizing
Author's Response:
And thank you so much for your comments. I'm very glad you enjoy my story enough to come check if I posted! I think the new girls will definitely fine ways to incorporate themselves into being involved and I believe I will develop Rasha going forward.
[Report This]Date: June 13 2023 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 17 - The Suburban Goddess II
Happy to see an other chapter this story is so perfect.
Author's Response:
Thank you again! I appreciate the support.
[Report This]Date: May 16 2023 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Interlude II
This story every chapter is so perfect .The amount of detail, the fact that you make the character evolve with every chapter. Thanks again for this chapter and i looking forward for the next one.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I work very tediously on details and I appreciate the compliment.
[Report This]Date: May 16 2023 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Interlude II
insanely amazing work
Author's Response:
Insanely big thank you!
[Report This]Date: April 29 2023 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
I only found this story recently and it is very interesting so far! Especially the maternal themes. I have got to read some more 🙂
Author's Response:
Thank you! Let me know what you think.
[Report This]Date: April 25 2023 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Interlude I
Great chapter! The POVs are always so detailed and immersive, both from the normal and tiny perspectives.
Kristen, Ginny and Leslie are all very well written and their personalities really complement the power they hold over the shrunken cities. Though, it would be interesting to see how the other moms in the neighborhood treat the micros too.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Minivoid. I'm glad for your compliment on the details.
There will be many more moms and other characters that will become involved and I can't wait to show everyone.
[Report This]Date: April 25 2023 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Interlude I
This is a very interesting addition! Looking forward to the Nano POV
Author's Response:
It's finally coming next chapter, then they will be a good part of the story.
[Report This]Date: April 24 2023 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Interlude I
I wait this chapter so much,and it was worth every second. Amazing work one of the best story i read in my life everything is perfect. Thanks so much for this
Author's Response:
Thank you for your patience and your kinds words!
[Report This]Date: February 27 2023 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Stress Test
This is great! I can't wait for more... your writing is so good.
Author's Response:
Thank you, titantonic! I hope you keep enjoying
[Report This]Date: February 23 2023 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Stress Test
I was just dying for another chapter and I was so happy to see one added today. Great work as usual. I love your writing style; like I've told you before, it's something I'm quite jealous of! (Wiggling her toes over the skyline, such a simple but impactful visual. Sliding her foot back and making the squeaking sound, it all just sounds so real.)
On to the story. As I was reading this, I was thinking 'wow, Kirsten's really starting to become less and less worried about them, isn't she?' Almost indifferent. Which is my favorite giantess personality. But then at the end when she almost took out Braithe, holy crap. I loved how she tried rationalizing it and justifying it in her mind. Man, my heart was racing with excitement as her foot came down over it. I simultaneously wanted her to do it and NOT do it at the same time. But then the crowning moment for me was when Kristen told them to clean her sandals instead. Such a power move on her part and a humiliation to the little city.
Awesome work, great chapter. Please keep continuing this. I can see this being as epic as Grove View. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter already.
Author's Response:
Thank you, carnage! Your writing style is quite amazing so I appreciate your feedback whenever I get it. I'm trying to write this story more realistic than I did with Grove View, a lot of people want to focus on the fetish stuff. I want to focus on the character first, the rest will come later as a happy consequence.
I think the indifference is what's going to be the catalyst for her accepting her new role,I think part of her is starting to like the power too, even if it was brought on by a shitty date and a bit of alcohol, in a way, it might serve as a tool for more control over her own life, go figure.
Date: February 22 2023 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
Amazing, chapter as always. Hope to see one focus on stinky feet.
Author's Response:
I can assure you there will be a few emphatic chapters around aromas in the future.
[Report This]Date: February 22 2023 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Stress Test
Amazing. I like how this chapter sets up a fun time for Ginny and a potential stepping stone for how Kristen will develop more ways to interact with the micros, and arguably with the nanos, too
Author's Response:
These last two chapters are pretty big stepping stones from Kristen becoming use to her new role in life.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2023 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
Leaving another review, because this story is just that good (new chapter coming soon, I hope :D?).
Kristen's internal struggle is so well done. Love how she's slowly warming up to her role as goddess.
Your descriptions, particularly from the tiny point of view, are so immersive. Their feeling of helplessness and awe, as well as the sheer scale.
I'd love to see more worship scenes, boob stuff, and unaware (especially from the nano's point of view). The nano scenes are my favorite!
Again, excellent story. You are spinning gold here! I check every day for an update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kindness. I do believe we are going to start seeing our main character become who I intentionally wrote her to be.
I can also promise was more tiny POV coming.
Nano stuff will be a major story driver later on, we're just not there yet, but it's coming.
[Report This]Date: February 02 2023 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 13 - The Power Visit Part 2
I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. Keep it up man. Great work! I love Ginny obviously, but I'm really excited to read more about Leslie.
Author's Response:
Thank you carnage! For anyone that doesn't know, carnage is a great writer and you should check out his stories as well.
Date: February 01 2023 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 13 - The Power Visit Part 2
I can tell Leslie is gonna be my favorite character in here (which hopefully she’s in here more). I’m always a fan of overly cruel giantesses (Jessica was by far my favorite in the original Incident story). Really hoping to see non-unaware vore soon! And barefoot crush
Author's Response:
There will be a few cruel characters here and there, Leslie might not be around all the time, but there are many plans for people who might even be worse than any other characters I have ever written. Kristen will have her fair share of fun too.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2023 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 13 - The Power Visit Part 2
I meant to say I would like to see more bare feet stuff from both Ginny and Kristen in regards to Ostrov's nanos, because they both appear to be less destructive and relatively gentle.
I find Leslie to be a very brutish character. That's not to say she's badly written. On the contrary, I, eventually, got to understand that in spite of her other questionable perspectives and behavior she was someone who could be relied on to get to the point of things and ultimately stopped Kristen from lying to herself about how she genuinely felt about her situation.
Great job!
Author's Response:
There's a ton of bare feet stuff coming up, now that I think Kristen understands her role a little bit more, I think she wont be as hesitant to walk around without shoes and the like.
Leslie was a necessary character to progress Kristen, you said it exactly right. I don't want another 14 chapters of Kristen trying to figure things out, Leslie was the tool to do so.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2023 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 13 - The Power Visit Part 2
I really hope to see more bare feet stuff with the Ostrov nanos and Ginny somehow
[Report This]Date: January 07 2023 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Power Visit Part 1
This is the kind of chapter that I've been waiting for! I love how Ginny patiently waited for her chance for the spotlight, and even taking care of the baby monitor.
Even so, I suspect I might enjoy Leslie's "help" even more, whatever that may entail..
Personally, I don't mind having less tiny POV, but I know it's important for various reasons so I'm still looking forward to reading it
Author's Response:
Ginny is a character I enjoy writing, I can't wait to take her into the present.
I believe a lot of people are going to love Leslie's help.
Tiny POV is something I always struggle with, sometimes it isn't as enjoyable for me to write, so we will how it goes, I know a lot of people love reading it though.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2023 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
Wonderful story, I wonder how might Kristen interact with Nanos?
Author's Response:
Oh, don't worry, there will be plenty of interaction with the nanos coming in the future.