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Reviewer: Riverd0g Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2024 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Origins!

I fixed the first chapter and added a vore scene!

Reviewer: realman Signed star [Report This]
Date: May 03 2024 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 1: Origins!

These stories have been around forever published under various pen names and it's always the same setup- long, bizarre buildup and a smidge of actual vore. Meh

Author's Response:


I see the problem you pointed out, thanks for the constructive criticism. I will edit the first chapter this weekend and add a vore scene. I’ll contact you when I’ve done this.

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