Reviews For Sisterly Love
Reviewer: rygar300 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: May 16 2013 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Try discribing her body. Like is she tall/short, big/small chested, thin/fat. That kind of thing. Also, I really like what you have so far. Cant wait to see more.
Reviewer: GMD Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: May 15 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Suggestions? Longer chapters. That's about it. But for a first story... Not bad at all. Just longer chapters. And more dialogue wouldn't hurt. But it's good. Really.