Reviewer: janii8556 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 1: Troy's Troubles Begin

well good start and hope to see more and soon from you.

wouldnt 1/2inch be more exciting to read about , atleast his siblings could see and do some naughty things (he has lot of members of family to notice em). whats can a speck do :) . it was just my idea as you have gave it a great starting ..

hope other readers will also agree to me .