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Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 1:52 PM Title: A Friend Arrives

Much better! You added some good detail which is great. Now I would focus on writing longer chapters and slowing down the pace a bit. Everything's happening so quickly. This story has a lot of potential though. Can't wait for chapter 3

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