Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2017 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 10

He probably must feel bad if he can't even hold her, but I'm willing to bet

she will congratulate his performance instead (and he will wish she didn't).

Even worse, according to the tags this story is going all the way down, to an inch and below - I can't wait to see that! (and everything before that)

 

PS "displaying him in the afterglow his own..."

Author's Response:

The majority of this story is definitely spent with Ben at a comparatively larger size, like he is now, but by the ending we'll see him at a size much closer to the usual kinds of stories I write.

And good catch.