[Report This]Date: July 29 2022 1:40 AM Title: Shopping Shenanigans
Rachel obviously loves Lio in more ways than one and, by what we saw, has everything planned out to live with and care for him till the end. But Ava is sure to brew trouble for her and I can see jealousy playing a big part in Lio’s life after he fully shrinks down.
For starters, Ava just left Lio alone while he might experience another shrinking episode. I can not see Rachel being happy about this.
PS.: sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.
Author's Response:
You see conflict where there is none. Rachel has nothing planned for him. She's just making sure her brother will have facilities at his eventual new scale. That's not planning out everything, that's just not being an idiot. It's her job to be prepared, but she is not gonna hate Ava
She's leaving him for a few minutes, she knows where he is, and will get back asap. It's the same as leaving someone for a really long bathroom visit. Again, you see conflict where there is none.
[Report This]Date: July 28 2022 2:18 PM Title: Shopping Shenanigans
God I just love seeing Lio and Ava together! Every chapter makes me want to see them just kiss already. Also I wonder what that piece of jewelry Ava is getting is for, but it makes me suspicious in a good way.
Also to answer your question from the last review, when he gets to mm height personally I'd like to see some body exploration. Since at that point Ava is just gonna be a landscape to him physically speaking since I feel like both her and Lio's sister are still gonna treat him with respect with how you're portraying them. It would be interesting to just set him loose on her if they ever get intimate because it would open the door to a lot of opportunities for descriptions of her body parts in comparison to him just to get the scope of his size. Like how would foreplay work let alone sex with Ava at that size. I trust you can make it interesting with the whole augmented senses thing now that Ava is confirmed to have it.
In the end, feel free to do what you think would fit the story best. I'll still come back to read whenever you upload no matter what you choose to do.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the characters enough to feel this way. As for the jewelry, we shall see in due time.
You'll be pleased to know I absolutely adore body exploration, especially at such a size where the giantess truly becomes a landscape. I have ideas for what will happen, though admittedly scenarios for Ava are easier to come up with due to them being able to be.... intimate. With Rachel, things need to be more nuanced, certain areas will be restricted for obvious reasons. Though I'm sure there are reasons for Rachel to set her brother to explore the landscape of her body. For Ava, well, yeah there's the intimate and lewd reasons.
Date: July 28 2022 2:01 PM Title: Shopping Shenanigans
I think we've all read enough shrinking stories to have some idea of what she's getting at the jewelery store ',:)
Author's Response:
Maybe you do, maybe you don't. We shall see in due time.