[Report This]Date: January 07 2024 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
Let me begin by stating the obvious: your story is amazing! I have yet to catch up with the latest chapters, but I have to say it now: your storytelling is amazing.
As far as I can tell, you are managing to tell a real story around Jake’s size and fetishes. And that is because Jake’s story is not about his lust, but his strugles. His despair after shrinking again… And before that, seeing how Jake lacks space and understanding within the family, his low self esteem, him trying to cause as little trouble as possible… man, that felt real.
Jacob feels like he needs to be accepted inside his own family! As if he was less. Less important to them. Is he? I hope not.
I would like to comment more, but I want to do that when I am all caught up.
Thanks for writing and sharing with us! Your world building reminds me of "Homunculus", a classic from the site. Are you perhaps familiar?
Again: amazing work. Keep it up!!
PS.: Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.
Author's Response:
You seem perfectly fluent to me my friend, and thank you for the kind words. I am doing my best to both tell a story for those who want it, and include the stuff for people who just want the fun steamy moments, so I'm glad to hear that you're appreciative of that. As for 'Homunculus' by Cayce, yes I have, it is one of my main inspirations as well as the first story I read on here when I was well below the age I should have been when interacting with the site and community (haha). Thank you for the review! I hope you continue to enjoy what I have planned!