Reviews For Olfactory Odyssey
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Reviewer: King james Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2024 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 18

An incredible episode! More jada episodes would be nice. It was a good thing she offered him her foot as food and sent him farting. Maybe when she farts on the way to work, she can use Jake as a fart silencer and satisfy her hunger with her feet.

Reviewer: Asset of Ass Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2024 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 18

OMG!!! This is honestly one of the best chapters I’ve read. I cannot get over how amazingly descriptive you are! Not only did lil Jake experience a fart but all kinds of other gross things at the hands of his sister. I was thinking the mom would fart on him last chapter but I like where you took it. Don’t ever stop

Reviewer: Storyviewer221 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2024 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 18

This is so fantastic! Easily lived up to all my expectations and went far beyond! The descriptions of the smells and sizes of everything around Jake were amazing, so intense and visceral. The way you described Jada's arm coming down was so great and immersive. And the farts were everything I wanted. Them affecting Jake that intensely was so good. I loved how for a moment it seemed Jada was actually giving Jake mercy only to feed him the most disgusting thing she could find. I enjoyed and loved everything about this chapter, it's easily one of the best I've read on this website. Gonna read the next chapter very soon, absolutely cannot wait for more. I've started very much looking forward to these chapters every few days. Thank you so much for writing and giving us one of the best stories I've read on here period.

Reviewer: Iunno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2024 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 18

I do love how these characters feel like actual characters for the most part. I mean no offense but I fully expected only smut lol no story.


Jada talks about how she pretty much made herself an archetype to stand out as a middle child.


Chen coming to the realization that she relied on having Jake as a malleable and easily manipulated boy toy just as much as he relied on her(rare to see gts stories that actually pay mind to the potential negative effects that owning a specific tiny person would have on the owner. Usually just the tiny is affected)


Jenna's mental gymnastics about her son and just being happy he's back.


Really excited to see where this goes. I have a prediction but it all depends on whether or not all your tags and size roles tell the exact future of the story or some things are left out.


Keep up the good work



Author's Response:

I do plan on incorporating all the tags I have! And thank you, yeah, I want the characters to feel like actual characters that think in their own right, not just walking body parts that Jake will be smothered under at some point!

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2024 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 18

Sniff 😢 omg that was beautiful 🥹😭😭😭 this chapter was everything I could have imagined 😭😭😭 thank you for this gift and Finally we get to see Jada greatness as she is officially my favorite sister of the family and it only took her 1 chapter 🤧🤧🤧🤧


here to future interactions of Jake and Jada always being this way and once again thank you 😊 



Author's Response:

Thanks as always for your support! Glad you liked it!

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