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Reviewer: amerdism Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2023 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 26

*sigh* I was hoping for a happy ending where Heather got back to her family, oh well, good story either way.

Reviewer: BabyZoe Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2022 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Truly one of the best stories I have ever read. The subjugation of a suburban mom into a plaything into a pet. Love it.

Reviewer: ThaPhoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2022 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 26

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Reviewer: hunterfury22 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2022 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 26

This was such a great story and I hate that it's ending. Are you thinking about going back to the Sorority stories any time soon or maybe sequels to other stories? I love your writing.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2022 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 26

So this is it?

Poor Hot Mom, she just wanted to be appreciated and did all she could and still ends up dead due to Em's lust etc. I do wonder what actually became of Zoey though since she was the reason she ran to the Lex/Em in the first place.

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2022 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 26

Well, she just kept having shrinking spurts and the longer she lived under Emily the more casual cruelness she witnessed by the two girls and their friends so maybe this ending was inevitable. Maybe Siggy could've saved her if she started taking pity on her instead of mostly being smug about her permanence. If Emily started letting let her handle and sharing a bed with little Hot Mom, I bet she could've buttered up to Emily and Lexie to let her keep Heather as her own little playmate/pet.

This is a story I'd really like to see one "What if?" chapter for. Do you think you could make one chapter for if Heather stayed at her home to meet her husband and Zoe or if she somehow ended up back in Zoe's hands? And show us if you would've done with the characters in Heather's family? Would Zoe and her dad be loving and doting towards Heather, keeping her safe at home and caring for her whether or not she was a 18" shrinkie or a 1" shrinkie? Or if you planned on making one or both of them just as cruel towards Heather as typical society or have the same gradual disinterest or apathy towards Heather's safety or treatment as a big pet shrinkie or a a tiny morsel/disposable one?

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2022 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 26

Also from this bits Clues scattered about I figure she was doomed either way.  I think she was dead women unless she happened upon a caring giant but that didn’t happen . So yea at least she isn’t in pain and suffering anymore.


Thankyou for the story.  Now I need to watch something cute and fluffy.  Look forward to your next work.

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2022 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 26

Poor hot mom. That’s a bad way to go. But at least she won’t suffer anymore.

Reviewer: ThaPhoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2022 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 25

Hot mom is now booby pocket mom x3 love this story. I was seriously so scared for the tiny they were playing hot potato with. I’m glad you ended it the way you did. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2022 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 25

I'm curious what the end game for Hot Mom will be. She seeming can't get much smaller before they lose track of her entirely.

She really seems up against it with who she's currently trapped with if things get any more dire.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2022 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 24

It is nice to see Em happy for once, a silver lining if you will in all the power hungry ruling.

Siggy seems like the real MVP here given all she's been through before and during the tale.

Reviewer: ThaPhoenix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2022 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great stuff as always!! Really love the relationship developing between Olivia and Emily!! This was a fun chapter to read and as always it is a pleasure waiting for Mondays to roll around each week! :3

Reviewer: ThaPhoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2022 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

Heck yes! One of my favorite stories! Loved to see the interaction with Siggy a couple of chapters ago.


You can really begin to see that even though Siggy said things would change now that Heather shrank, they really haven’t. Seems like she’s the preferred toy.


Here’s to hoping Hot Mom might end up under a Siggy foot just from the jealousy! Can’t wait for the next Chapter!!

I suspect Hot Moms shrinky dinks aren’t finished.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2022 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 23

You kind of feel for Emily here, still oppressing another human but she seems like a really nice person who deserves a bit of happiness.

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2022 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 23

I honestly never really have an idea of what to leave in the review of this story except that it is well done and that I really feel for Heather.

 Though the context clues we have gotten do lead me to believe she was right to leave her family, honestly she sounds kinda like a trophy wife, and I don’t know enough to decide about her child but yea.  This life isn’t prob much better but at least it’s strangers and not some one u loved so the betrayal aspect isn’t there.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2022 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 22

Em does seem to get her heart wrapped around the latest fling of the week. Likely a true sweetheart of a girl who if not for the oppressing another human to her whims would be quite the root forable gal.

Reviewer: Toerider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2022 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love how this is developing.   Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2022 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 21

Siggy really feels like there is more hiding under her skin that whilst Lex has stamped out is still there buried under a heavy doc.

Hot Mom losing her dress seems like a bummer but that is the downer side of getting to enjoy all the sweet Emily attention.

Reviewer: Weary_Traveler Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2022 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 21

Still loving this story! I suspect an abrupt and cruel ending on the horizon given how small she's become, although hoping to get a picture of Izzy's operation first.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2021 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 20

Emily being mean to the tiny makes more sense now knowing he was likely previously a dick to her at full size.

I also understand her mother wanting to cover up Hot Mom. I know the fetishy world etc but you just couldn't see people leaving tinies dangly bits all over the place in reality. The PC police would be losing their shit.

Even if she is oppression/entrapment Hot Mom you do really feel for Emily. She seems like a quality person in the world of RAWR GIANTS...kind of like Carmen from Stepped On.

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