Date: June 21 2016 6:35 PM Title: Opening
This... was a fantsatic story, even though i came back for the second time, i still loved it
Would like to see a story with the same start of this story, where the guy shrinks and ends up with his best friend(Girl) and she treats him like a little boyfriend, like where she kisses him, toys with him a bit, but no sadist type stuff, that is not my stuff
I have no idea how to give stars, So ill just say 10/5 star story, probs gonna pass by this story again and read it again, and it's still gonna be as exciting as the first time
Date: January 10 2009 6:10 PM Title: Day 2
this story is really cool, but it reminds me a lot of Homunculus by Cayce
Author's Response: That story is one of my all time favorites, so I wouldn't be surprised if there are some similarities, that one was a huge inspiration to me.
Date: January 10 2009 6:46 AM Title: Day 7
Oh my god. Incredible story!
Here's to hoping that we see lots more from you down the road!
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it. :)
[Report This]Date: January 08 2009 3:24 PM Title: Day 7
This was a truly fascinating story. I wanted to read the whole thing and comment right away but unfortuantely time didnt allow for that.
This story was truly a treat to read, you did masterful job on the characters, each one felt fully fleshed out and real. They had there own lives, histories, thoughts and independances.
The writing quality is top notch from start to finish, solid discriptions. I really enjoyed how you never really focused on one aspect. It was just a general flow. You didnt spend 3 pages on a foot scene and then quickly raced to the next. Each and every part had equal billing and flowed into one.
I give this story a 10 out of 10 and look forward to your next work.
Author's Response: Oh wow, that's a lot for the great review. There will be more to come, thanks. :)
Date: January 07 2009 1:01 AM Title: Day 3
This is very well written, really good. I like how Liara transformed almost... but... i can also see you're a fan of hand-held/hando herudo. No problems here on that regard.
Author's Response: Haha yeah, I had a handful of inspirtaions writing that. Glad you like it, thanks.