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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2024 5:37 PM Title: Reunion and Consequences: Part 4

Interesting. I will admit that when she fell asleep I was hoping Faen would digest Lia, and absorb her spirit, which she would then transfer into some water to turn Lia into a water spirit as well. But this was still good.



Author's Response:

Damn, that is a pretty fun idea. It'd be interesting to see how that effects their dynamic. Maybe they both get stuck there and yet another traveller comes and the whole thing happens again haha. 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: angelicsiren Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2024 12:31 AM Title: The Elf and the Tiny Water Spirit

Really nice read, I've enjoyed every chapter since I found it on aryion.

Only thing I think is a shame though is that Lia didn't go for a full tour through Faen after calming down.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad it was worth the wait.

I'll admit I didn't consider that direction, but if it's full tour you're after, I've got a real good scene planned for that next story I mentioned. So stay tuned ;)

Reviewer: Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2024 6:44 PM Title: Reunion and Consequences: Part 4

Absolutely wonderful story. I really enjoyed seeing the dynamic between the two grow and evolve, and despite the teasing nature the fact that they really did care and grew closer together. The dialogue felt more natural than most stories on here, and it was just a really fun read all around. Thank you for writing it!


Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Pnwpaddleboarder Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2024 6:45 PM Title: Reunion and Consequences: Part 3

fun story! very well written. 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2024 2:32 PM Title: Reunion and Consequences: Part 3

Nice can't wait to see it. Especially if something happens and Faen forgets about Lia like Lia forgot about Faen.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! We'll see if Faen can stay awake haha. The afternoon sun is pretty good for a nap...

Reviewer: wisecrack3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2024 6:36 AM Title: Reunion and Consequences: Part 1

DAMN this is good! Glad to see a continuation after so long and that it flows so well into the chapter! The banter between them is great and I love the amount of subtle worldbuilding is used to characterize the two. Best of luck with the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

I have a lot of fun with the worldbuilding in these, though I was a little worried it might've been distracting. I'm glad to hear it wasn't!

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2024 11:44 PM Title: Reunion and Consequences: Part 1

Nice. I wonder if one of the trials is to have Faen swallow Lia like Lia swallowed her.



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: MarsV2 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2024 6:46 PM Title: The Elf and the Tiny Water Spirit

Been waiting forever for this!!!!

SOOO GLAD YOU'RE KEEPING IT GOING!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you, it feels great to be back!

Reviewer: Jsmith20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2024 6:12 AM Title: Reunion and Consequences: Part 1

I've waited years for this update. I'm so excited for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Honestly, seeing you come back with another kind review after 2 years genuinely makes me so happy. You've made my whole week. 

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2024 5:57 AM Title: Reunion and Consequences: Part 1

This was very unique and quite sexy. A tiny person formed out of water is an idea that I haven't seen done before. I love how the absent-minded Lia just guzzled her down. And the role reversal at the end when Faen becomes the giant one is pretty fun.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

In truth the whole idea came to me when I enountered a Faen-like creature in the wild, and I realised it had so much potential I just had to write a story about it.

Reviewer: bubsboy81 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2022 1:38 PM Title: The Elf and the Tiny Water Spirit

Your writing style is quite enjoyable to read, I liked how you introduced the characters and seamlessly swapped perspectives. This was a fantastic start that has me hooked, I'm looking forward to seeing were you take the story next. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind review! I'm glad you liked it. 

I've got a few fun ideas for how the story will continue, so stay tuned!

Reviewer: Jsmith20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2022 6:51 AM Title: The Elf and the Tiny Water Spirit

I swear, Faen better survive! Don't you dare kill her; I will throw some serious hands if you do. 


This is the start to a really great story and an even better relationship between the two characters. I so want to see their relationship progress and the obvious increase in affection and affinity towards and for each other. That gentle tag better be accurate. 

Your description is good and paints enough detail without it being overwhelming. Something that might streamline is in the time jumps to put an asterisk * instead of just an extra break between them. Also, it's a pain on this website, and you have to redo it once its pasted here, but italicizing thoughts is a great way to weave in thoughts naturally.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! 

I'm glad you like Lia and Faen's dynamic; and don't worry, I've got a lot of fun plans for how these two get along in the future ;)

Thanks for the formatting tip. I'll have to double check in the future, cause I definitely had nice little line breaks in the original document. 

I hope you continue to enjoy! 

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