Reviews For My maid~
Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2023 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 My tender and strict maid
Date: March 05 2023 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 My tender and strict maid
The he/she grammar errors make it difficult to understand who’s talking.
Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2022 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 1 My tender and strict maid
Author's Response:
Date: November 20 2022 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 1 My tender and strict maid
Your story concept seems intriguing; but your use of pronouns is confusing {e.g. "Vanessa found it hard and hesitated to call him by her first name". From "him" to "her", are they male or female?} and the ability to increase "text size" is messed up {i.e. the text overlaps at increased size}.
Nice potential, though you have to clean up your grammar, specifically your pronoun usage; and fix your text sizing issue.
Author's Response:
Well, I would do it if I didn't know English, since I use the translator to upload the novel, the original novel comes in Spanish but when translating it it gets complicated.