Reviews For Mmmmmm
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: June 28 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good story. But I think she should have tormented him much longer. Oh if he woke up naked she couldn't dangle him by his shirt. Thats a mistake in continuity.
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: June 26 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hmmmmm.
"When he came to, he found himself naked" If he was naked, how could she dangle him by his shirt?
Too short...