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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2014 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 56: Freaks and Toys

Imho the prospect of his friends becoming their toys is the most scary thing you've ever written (never mind that she wasn't even thinking about them...).

I've been thinking what I would do in his place, but I have yet to find an option that doesn't end really bad or isn't at least terribly risky ("I can't think of them as toys, they're my size" - "oh, you're right, let's fix that!", etc).

On the other hand, there is someone who would be more than willing to be involved, but even then, I'm not sure how to revenge chapter 42 and making 100% sure Gina stays unharmed: on top of that, I've had a couple of days to think about it, and I'm afraid poor Jack will have to make a choice fast...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. Glad to hear I still have the ability to up the scary factor on this thing. You're right in thinking there aren't many great options for Jack at this point, and his chances are going to become even more limited in the next couple chapters. And unfortunately for Gina, Julia has a very liberal definition of the word toy.

Reviewer: TinyLeo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2014 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 56: Freaks and Toys

Hope to see more plot coming. Besides that, great chapter as always!! Keep writing :)



Author's Response:

Thanks very much. There will be more plot-related developments taking place within the next two chapters.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 56: Freaks and Toys

Great chapter. Nice to see this story again.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 56: Freaks and Toys

Well look at you Wally West!

 

Wasn't expecting that twist at the end but you've managed to hook me once again, I can't wait till July-August for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hardy har har. Just for that, I have a good mind to post it in the June-July range instead.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 5:00 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

Julia is an absolutely despicable human being, but it's part of what makes this story so interesting! I love reading about the battle of wits between her and Jack, an invisible battle fought with words and subtleless. It really feels more like a psychological thriller than a fetish story...I can't wait to see what you have planned for the finale, I can already see it'll be a doozy.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I appreciate the comparison to the thriller genre; that's definitely the atmosphere I'm going for.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 56: Freaks and Toys

Your starring in the upcoming flash movie, who knew.

Well I love this story, so happy for the quick update. Jack is quite a genius, just want to point that out.

Hopefully Flash can update in a month, that would be great. I'm not the only one praying.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I fully plan on adding another chapter before the month is out.

Reviewer: NatsuDraga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sweat Sock Hop

love this



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2014 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 55: Deal with the Devil

Well, I have to confess, the wait was so long, I almost overlooked this chapter, completely! Lucky for you, I was perusing page 3 of "Most Recent" out of pure boredom!

It was well worth the wait, though, just to finally learn the truth. It's Up-Chuck who was the traitor? Oh, I can't wait to see what poetic justice you have in store for him!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  I doubt I'm ruining anything by saying the justice shall be as poetic as it is swift sometime in the following chapters.  (Swift for the characters, at least)

Reviewer: Javert Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 55: Deal with the Devil

Brilliantly done.  It always boggles my mind how many 5-star rated stories there are on this site that don't even approach the quality of your work.  There are many talented authors here, but in my opinion, you're the best by a mile.



Author's Response:

Oh geez, I'm gonna blush.  Thanks for reading/reviewing, man.  I'm glad you enjoy the stories.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2014 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 55: Deal with the Devil

With everything they've gone through, death through childbirth doesn't seem like a half bad way to go down.

Author's Response:

Depressing as it is to say, you're probably right.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2014 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 55: Deal with the Devil

"Curious" isn't the right word; I'd say "tantalized", but "this chapter made you tantalized" sounds worse than awful (keep in mind that last time I founc the story with 54 chapters already written, so I'll have to slow down my pace a lot :)

 

I can't help thinking that Jack lost a great opportunity to let some his anger out (as jealousy of course), but I guess that could have been risky.

 

And then the chapter ends... how you can still surprise us after so many chapters is beyond me, but it seems that you keep on doing it.

 

My only serious critique is that you said the story is divided in four acts; experimental evidence indicates some ~20 chapters per act, at 4months/chapter... I f***ing hate you! ;p



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing!  Your guess on Jack's opportunity is not a bad one, and you may see some pay-off for it in the next chapter (hint hint).  Glad to know I can still surprise at 50+ chapters though. Act 3 is going to be a tad shorter than the previous 2, we're probably ~5 away, and the same will probably go for Act 4.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2014 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 55: Deal with the Devil

More than curious, more like excitement. Hasn't seem like 6 months in period between chapters. It so well written it's seem like a week apart.

This is one of my favorite story's. So I'm hoping it won't be the 4-6 months. Soon as possible would be great, I vote for that one.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! It will be just as soon as I can force myself to sit down and actually think concretely in word-shaped thoughts about typing.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 55: Deal with the Devil

If only you updated every Sunday like Nascar...I don't watch it but would gladly check here each weekend for new updates.

 

A chilling chapter, very well done.



Author's Response:

Thanks man.  I can't imagine a Sunday commitment with this thing, especially since (in theory) there's still another full act to go on this thing.

Reviewer: Teemo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 55: Deal with the Devil

Im sure you still have PLENTY of people still waiting for this one (I know I am. :3)   Take your time bro :D



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I'm glad to know people haven't abandoned me due to the half-year of nothing on this one.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2014 4:12 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

Still have faith that this story will get a proper ending, even if Im an old man by the time it happens XD



Author's Response:

I swear, I do have a fairly elaborate ending nicely planned out on my head. It just has to be, you know, typed out and stuff.

Reviewer: schwuppy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07 2013 1:16 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

Iliki

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 42: Judge, Jury, and Executioner

Wow, I finally finished it!

I guess I loved chapter 36 more than it was worth, because some femdom movies do something similar at real size and it's always been a favorite of mine.

No typo this time, but it seemed to me that explaining the escape plan to the newcomer was a bit rushed (even if, to be honest, maybe it's because I didn't read the story in proper order, and so it really struck me).

 

PS

I don't know how you go on writing stories this long, but if you publish one chapter at a time, don't expect me to comment on each one -- for one, there are enouch comments already XD, and second, the story has been able to constantly surprise me, so commenting without reading some four/five chapter would feel... short-sighted?

 

And btw: do you have any plan for Mommy's TImeout 5? It's been almost a year, you know...

 



Author's Response:

Thanks once again for your responses to this story.  I agree with you on the critique of the escape plan's explanation.  That's partially owed to a pacing issue with the story overall.  The opening two acts of the story are much more indulgent and measured in their pacing, but by the beginning of the 3rd act I realized I needed to streamline the story's speed a bit if I'm going to be able to hold reader interest reliably, especially since this story's been around for a long time.  I hope you do continue to comment on this story once I post more, even if it's only every 5 or so.

I do very much have a plan for Mommy's Time-out 5, and actually have most of it written (let's just keep that between you, me, and anyone else who happens to read this comment).  My goal is to finish Toy Teacher or at least get within a chapter of it being done before I post anything new.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2013 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 32: Picnic with a Giantess

Holy... like I said I've read the last chapters and I'm finally discovering how the story got to that point, but even so, that Julia would ask if she was too hard and actually take a yes for an answer surprised me as much as it surprised Jack. Seriously.

 

But hey, it wouldn't be me without some typo, + I'm curious about this one: "a capella".

I'm curious because I'm italian and it's "cappella", but I found a lot of "a capella" or even "acapella" googling around -- is it actually an accepted alternative spelling? (Some people claim it's straight from latin, but my latin dictionary firmly states that "capella" is a diminutive of "goat" :)

 

<hurries back to reading>



Author's Response:

Thanks for another review.  I've enjoyed hearing your thoughts on this somewhat-oldie of mine.  I'm glad that bit with Julia's question threw you for a loop; expect to be thrown for quite a few more later on.

I'd say the word you found is loosely accepted as either, but for the sake of correctness (and because it seems to have stuck out to you) I did add in that extra p.

Reviewer: Karmakat49 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2013 5:01 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

I absolutely love this story! All the twist and turns are so exciting! You make it seem like this is really happening... good job and please update soon! I've been waiting for this!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2013 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 18: Little Taste

Wow, reading about Julia makes me think you grew up surrounded by psychotic girls or something...

I can't quite place it, but you make an awesome job of conveying the "feel" of interacting with her -- I found myself sometimes thinking "don't do X, don't do Y, do Z" (stinky feet? don't ever say yes, but must say something or she'll be mad; silly musical? ...) (*)

 

And when she does get mad, regardles of what she does in the end, it's amazing; in most stories I'd just read what the giantess is doing and how it's described, here it's like her mind is a force of nature and I'm always on the lookout for what she might do if someone is not careful/she just feels like it... ok, my description isn't that great, but I hope you understand what I mean because it's very very rare in a gts story!

 

 

 

PS

"coating my all over"? I'll admit I wanted to read on rather than stop and leave a comment, but then I read that... ;p

 

PS(2)

I'm scared of heights myself, so you can imagine what it was like reading about Gina; I still can't believe she finally sort of made it

 

PS(3)

My session timed out while I was writing this XD

(note to self: write the comment offline, break it it's too long, and then copy/paste it)

 

 

 

 

(*) even more impressive, it's more or less the same I felt reading the last chapters ("Well, we all make mistakes"...), and the story was written in the course of two years



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing again.  While I can't say I've grown up around psychotic girls, I'd be lying if I said my material for giantess characters isn't partially inspired by some of the stronger personalities I've met.  I always do my best to try to make the reader feel like they're along for the precarious ride in Julia's hands.  As for Julia's mind, one of my favorite aspects of the giantess fantasy is how simple personality traits can become mortally dangerous under the right circumstances with shrunken people, such as Julia's teenage emotions becoming a dark instability to her prisoners.  I'm glad you're enjoying it.

PS: Thanks for catching the typo.
PS(2): I hoped anyone with even a little acrophobia could sympathize with Gina; good to hear it worked.

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