[Report This]Date: November 01 2013 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 9: Second Detention
I'll admit I skipped this story at first -- read a chapter at random, found a girl playing school with tiny people, and decided it wasn't worth reading. BIGGEST. MISTAKE. EVER! I came back seeing so many comments and started reading from chapter forty-something, right after killing some Beth, kept on reading to the end (which is chapter 54 as I'm writing this), and now I've started to read it properly -- you know, like, from the beginning... I just can't tell (in a single comment) how good it is -- I guess I should have taken the habit to write a short review after every 5 chapters or so, but 240 comments probably gave you an idea anyway :) Well, I'm going back to read, but before that: "swinging her navy blue flat-clad food" -- for a moment I imagined it was oing to be a different kind of punishment :) [Seriously anyway: one typo in more than twenty chapters? That says a lot about how well written this story is, even in this kind of details]
Author's Response: Thanks for the review; I appreciate you giving the story another shot despite your first impression being unappealing. I'm the first to admit that the initial premise may be overly familiar to any regular reader of giantess fiction, but my goal with this tale was to build the storyline over time with some level of depth (or at least as much depth as a fetish story can handle without getting boring). I hope you'll let me know your thoughts on the rest of the story's chapters when you reach them.
Thanks for catching that typo, by the way. Being the grammar nazi I am at times, I live by the code that anytime I make a typo, a puppy dies, but on a story this long, it was almost inevitable. Sorry, puppy.
Date: September 15 2013 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
I actually think that Julia's behavior has driven her parents to raging alcoholism.
[Report This]Date: September 13 2013 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
Whoa! This is getting convoluted, alright. But, in a GOOD way! :-)
Author's Response:
At 54 chapters, there probably ought to be some sort of convulution.
Date: September 12 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
Jack such a good actor, or is it just insanity.
But nice twist at the end of chapter with Charlie's.
And it kind of seemed like Jack was jealous at the end there.
Author's Response:
It's probably a little of both. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: September 12 2013 9:23 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Daaamn this is a freaking masterpiece. I love the mixture of her emotional vulnerability, his manipulation and her effective omnipotence. Very few stories try something like this and even fewer do it so well.
Kinda reminds me of Oyayubihime actually. But way more intricate and awesome. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words. The relationship between Sayako and Yuuichi is one I hold up as the right way to show a giantess-tiny relationship, so that's high praise.
[Report This]Date: September 12 2013 8:25 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
The way you write Julia makes me almost sympathetic towards her, aalllmmmooost. It takes a lot of skill to write someone that is a complete monster and somehow make the audience feel for them a bit, so cookies for you! And the fact that Charlie ratted them out finally comes out, it seems like its Charlie who ACTUALLY loves her, whereas Jack is seducing her to try to find a way out of their predicament. Great Story! I've been with this for a long time and hope you come to a conclusion, however horrible or happy it may be.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing! You are pretty darn close in your analysis of Charlie. We are slowly but surely moving toward a conclusion here, so stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: September 12 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
Wish I could see that sort of "thing on the internet". ; )
Author's Response:
I'm sure many on this site share that wish.
[Report This]Date: September 12 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
So easily, (you make it seem effortless) and above all...still the best!
Although, I wonder if you'll ever be able to 'top' this one Jack? :=/
Juia's anthropomorphic nature really shines through, making her seem so incredably huge....a landscape of unpredictable woman.....
Great stuff!
Author's Response:
You flatter me, as usual. Thanks for reading. I'll certainly do my best to top it. I've got a ton of other stories planned out in my head. Whether they ever see the light of day before I die of old age is another matter entirely.
Date: September 12 2013 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
Somebody's getting their ass beat. Perhaps to death.
Author's Response:
Shhh you'll ruin it. ;)
[Report This]Date: September 12 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
Wow, I wasn't expecting the end of the chapter but the look into how she came to be was interesting.
Totally understand the God complex she has as well.
Author's Response:
Thanks much! Glad you enjoyed it. I figured it was high time we got a closer peek into her head.
[Report This]Date: September 12 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
Absolute thrilling¡¡¡ I read last few chapters since she ate Beth and decide to put all of them in a jar and I was thinking that every next chapter was going too out the plot...but god damn this is what I was expecting...One traitor in the tiny group...
I cannot wait to see the reactions, good work Jacksmith
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Rest assured I haven't forgotten that this story does, indeed, have a plot somewhere in there.
Date: September 10 2013 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 53: 99 Drops of Vodka on the Wall
I m lovin this story! One of the best ive read
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: September 08 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 53: 99 Drops of Vodka on the Wall
It makes me tremendously happy to see this updated with some regularity again.
Party on good sir, party on.
Author's Response:
Party on I shall. And hopefully the readers, as well.
Date: September 08 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 53: 99 Drops of Vodka on the Wall
Get to here about Julia, this should be good.
Plus she drunk
Author's Response:
Both very good things!
Date: September 08 2013 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 53: 99 Drops of Vodka on the Wall
Should have made her drink Everclear. That swig she took would've killed her.
Author's Response:
Oh, but that would've been far too simple, now wouldn't it?
[Report This]Date: September 08 2013 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 53: 99 Drops of Vodka on the Wall
Guys like him should work for the CIA, more often. They might finally put some actual intelligence in the phrase "intelligence-gathering!"
;-)
Author's Response:
Of course, if the training to acquire the necessary skills for the job involves anything like he's gone through here, I doubt there would be many applicants.
Date: September 03 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 52: Round Two
Glad to see this story updated again.
Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: September 03 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 52: Round Two
Same old story: "Wham! Bam! Drunken ma'am!"
;-D
Author's Response:
Yes, something like that
Date: September 03 2013 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 52: Round Two
AM I THE ONLY WOMAN IN THE WORLD WHOSE NIPPLES AREN'T SENSITIVE?!
Author's Response:
Don't fret, I think women in erotic stories are just gifted with enhanced nipple sense.
[Report This]Date: September 03 2013 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 52: Round Two
The plot doth thicken
Author's Response:
It doth indeed.