Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2021 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 5: One Little Choice

Ok, so I favorited this quite some time ago, but only now got around to reading it.

And......damn, like I am kicking myself for not reading it sooner.

This reality you crafted really is something else.

I had similar ideas awhile back, and have seen some similar ideas in one Giantess/size comic with tiny robots with people's memories being uploaded into them as sort of robot tiny clones.

And the idea of being able to sell or license out yourself like this would definitely lead to scenarios like the one you wrote here, with a girl choosing to crate little copies of herself to toy with and vent her own insecurities with, to feel powerful.

The nature of Jennifer being explored here with her tiny self, and her treatment of her was great, dark in some places, and revealing in others.

And that ending!!! That ending!!! The cycle repeating itself.

I love this, and it yet another gem you have added her to GTSworld, and to the size writing community, and I thank you for it. 

Reviewer: little mikey Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans

Fantastic story!  Fast paced and exciting, with a devilishly satisfying ending -- surreal horror and sense of finality (from the YouPet's perspective) mixed with an almost 'uplifting' sense of relief and contentedness from the 'real' Jennifer's perspective.  Great contrast there.

I usually prefer long stories, but I think in this case you were right to make this story short.  I suppose there's only so much you can do with two characters who already know each other totally and completely -- makes it hard to have drawn-out character development and intrigue if they both already know what's coming.  But it's perfect for a short-but-sweet story like this.

I suppose a follow-up story could be interesting, though -- not sure how, but I'm sure you could find a way to make it work, if that's what you wanted to do.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review man. I had several requests to make this one longer, but in the end I wanted the focus to stay squarely on the relationship of the giantess and clone rather than going into too much additional action, and making it short was the easiest way to do that. I will almost certainly do a follow-up at some point in the distant future, since this was quite fun.

Reviewer: Ackbar Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 5: One Little Choice

God this was such an engrossing, horrifying read. While this little Jennifer's fate was what it was, I honestly let out a sigh of relief when the tack didn't go through her.That was just...cripes.

And of course, I can't help but be amused that I actually snickered a bit at the ending. It's amazing how that works, really, knowing that that Jennifer is just as torturous and sadistic as...well, Jennifer. Knowing that she would be doing the same things that are going to be done to her.

Long story short, despite not being my own wheelhouse, this was yet another interesting read and I'm glad I gave it my time. The concept was an inspired one, and you carried it out with aplomb.

On MT6, that's happening a bit sooner than expected! And I even have a pre-emptive pit in my stomach over it because I get the feeling I'm gonna really hate Ella going off comments you've made about her presence! I'm also going to quietly hope that the mentioned book club member is Carolyn. For Scott's sake.

Also ecstatic to see that more Freshman is coming, and am curious to see whether or not we'll be picking up with more nice family time or heading back to school.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing man. I appreciate you venturing outside the wheelhouse once again.

I've made myself sit down and think through potential MT stories and with what I've come up with, Ella is going to have a big focus in the 7th one (wow, it's sickening to type out that I've almost done that many). And Carolyn is not the one who's going to appear. Teehee.

I'd answer about Freshman, but it'll be here soon enough for you to just see for yourself.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2014 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 5: One Little Choice

Re the story going to be longer: I'm not sure if it's how the story is written, but it seems it's only me, so nvm; the most rational explanation I can find is the thought of all the many things she wanted to try - but after reading the last chapter... oh well, I guess the fast ending adds to the feeling of helplessness :)

 

About Mommy's Timeout 6, I think I told you already that Judy is the best of all, and since #1 I can't help thinking what his future is going to be like with his girlfriend. And Susan's (from mt2) and the other women's reaction when they find out he's been drinking even more... but who cares? You said you're working on it and I thought it wouldn't happend before a few months at least - nothing else matters.

 

(btw, since I discovered that giantess stories can be long and actually have a plot, my todo list has been growing to 60 or so. The Freshman is one of those stories, so no idea about it)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review man. I see what you mean with the length; it probably could've gone on, but I wanted to keep things as simple and focused on the main concept as possible. Susan won't be showing up in the 6th entry though someone else from that 2nd story will. Hope you like the Freshman once you get around to it eventually.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 5: One Little Choice

I want to make love to this story.

Author's Response:

Physically, that would probably be challenging, though I am glad you enjoyed the end.

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2014 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 5: One Little Choice

Hasn't anyone ever told Jennifer, "You are what you eat"?

Brain cells die and are replaced with new ones grown from proteins, neurons and synapses are renewed and reconnected, and the genetic memory is updated for the next replication...

Author's Response:

I probably would've used that line if I thought of it while writing this chapter.  Ah well.

Reviewer: DarcKage Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2014 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans

Aw, I was really rooting for mini-Jennifer, hoping she could somehow get through to the real one and make her see the error of her ways. I guess it wasnt meant to be. It's funny how I saw her as the good guy in all this, yet she would've done the same if she were the real Jennifer, which she...kind of still was. This one really messes with the head.

 

Great short story dude, I look forward to the next one.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. My intention all along was to make the YouPet a very questionable good guy, seeing as she would be doing exactly what Jennifer is doing if she was her size, so I'm glad to hear it worked to an extent.  Glad to hear you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: DarcKage Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans

One more chapter?

 

I guess we're not getting a happy ending for little Jennifer. :(

Author's Response:

Proooobably not.  Hehe...

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 4: Improvisation

NOOOOO! I don't want it to be over!

You're such a tease. I demand that she be desecrated by having a sharp metal object shoved in her vagina! Or maybe where the sun don't shine, if you catch my drift...

Author's Response:

Hey now, I've gotta save some tricks for any follow-up stories I do for this!  Thanks for reading/reviewing.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 3: Phase 2

I'm not a big fan of brutality stories, but this is a hell of a well done version of that genre.  You do a great job of selecting which detail to focus on to really connect the reader to little Jennifer's experience.

I would love to see some conversations between the two Jennifers in between torture scenes.  

Author's Response:

I appreciate the review.  And when it comes to conversations, the remaining chapters actually do just that.