Date: June 10 2015 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my, a jacuzzi scene is coming! It's great to see them enjoying each other's company so much and now to take it to the next level, the sweetness of their relationship is not saccherine at all!
Date: June 07 2015 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
Addy doesn't mind him staring, she has carried a crush for a very long time so giving her that kind of attention wouldn't be unwelcome.
[Report This]Date: June 06 2015 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
A _fifth_ chapter, in less than 48 hours? :-D
You must be an Ascended typist.
[Report This]Date: June 04 2015 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh! And, thanks for living up to your screen name. ;-D
[Report This]Date: June 04 2015 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
Semi-comical poignancy? Outstanding!
:-)
Date: June 03 2015 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
And I really like this kind of guilty pleasure story, we could do with more on this site. Thanks for liking Downtrodden, I can't spoil the ending though. I don't mind a pg love story if you can pull it off but I think PG can turn off a lot of people where R seems to be the middle ground.
Date: June 03 2015 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love seeing more Gentle/MiniGTS! I feel we're outnumbered by shrink stories, and it's overwhelming. ;p
Your story reminds me a lot of one of my all-time favs, Luna's Ascension. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
thanks, I loved loona`s ascension too so that's a great compliment. I'm following your story as wall and thoroughly enjoying it. Please do finish!
Date: June 03 2015 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
Pretty fast for romance but you make the characters pretty likeable so it isnt a big issue at all.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And yeah I know it's fast, but try to remember that they have known each other for several years and there has always been some sort of chemistry. Its like your two good friends who everyone knew they would end up together FINALLY confessing to each other. They're very far from strangers.
Date: June 03 2015 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
Like the change in perspective and the little world building when she explained the changes she had to undergo. If this is your first, well done!
Author's Response:
That means a lot coming from someone who puts out great stories!
As much as some of the darker sides of the fetish are covered on this site I really wanted to have a story that mainly focused on two people really enjoying each other. I won't lie its a bit of s guilty pleasure story, so if you're coming for conflict there probably won't be much. Its mainly just a romance for gantle fans to enjoy. Though it will definitely earn is raiting :p admittedly I probably wouldn't bother with this story if it was going to stay pg. After all that's why most of us are here or came here to begin with!
I'm hoping downtrodden has a few 'fun' scenes! And preferably a happy ending!
[Report This]Date: June 03 2015 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
I really like this from the characters, dialogue and plot. This story is fantastic and I hope you continue it.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks! I plan to!
[Report This]Date: June 03 2015 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
Arguably the best relationship in a story that I have found on this site!
I just love Alex and Addison! They are enjoying themselves, and are a perfect match. (Hopefully it won't end like with Emily.)
Each chapter just gets better and better as these two strengthen their relationship.
I can't wait to see how they bond together in the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks that's awesome to hear :)
[Report This]Date: June 02 2015 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
If you can update a fourth chapter before, say, Labor Day? Then, you will have truly lived up to your screen name.
Wonderful story, thus far!
[Report This]Date: June 02 2015 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
Fantastic story Greaterthan!
[Report This]Date: June 02 2015 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! I love this story, please continue!! Excellent writing and descriptive scenes.