Date: February 21 2018 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Slowing reading all your work Ackbar, really enjoying reading it, wondering if this story will get updated need to find out what his sister is thinking.
Date: December 23 2016 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Miss your writing
Date: December 30 2015 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good chapter introducing Jenna. For Claire, I didn't know she was so dissapointed to not appreciate Corey to come for her soccer's game!
[Report This]Date: December 19 2015 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Interesting read again. You can feel the tension. I don't think Corey will ever be his old self again or his family. There is a lot of pain here.
Mellie is not playing, that is strange.
Date: November 06 2015 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
@Ackbar.
Indeed, my mistake. Thanks for reminding. I read many size change changing stories lately that I sometimes get a little mixed up. I forgot he hadn't drunk when he drove his car when I read chapter 4. An important detail, what makes this story good.
Author's Response:
It's not a problem :). And I am glad to hear the positive words - I hope to start updating this again before too long, I simply ran into a situation where I need to do some rewrites of what I already have but I have no time to do them with class currently. Still, thanks for the follow-up comment!
Date: October 14 2015 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, so Mom gives him some rules and chores. I thought he would be told where he can't go on the floor. Hope the Aunt gets him next. Look out when the sister gets him. Looking forward to this story.
Later,
Diesel
Date: October 11 2015 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well he has chance to have a loving family but well you know siblings lol.
[Report This]Date: October 10 2015 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Corey must set rules for himself. Never ever drive a car again and never drink alcohol again. Speak as little as possible and do all chores without questioning. Take in all the torture as well. Do what ever the family says for the rest of your life.
Can't wait for chapter 5.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the continued comments :)
I do want to provide a quick note of clarification: Corey wasn't drinking when this accident happened. It was late, he was tired, and the road was mostly empty - so he decided to press on the gas a bit more. But no alcohol was involved.
Date: October 01 2015 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait for chapter 4. What has Abby planned.
[Report This]Date: September 23 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is interesting. I see Corey thinks like me, hard punishment is deserved, but what kind?
This must be hard for the family as well. What kind of treatment would help Corey.
In the Omega stories "Consequences" and "Tough Love" you did an excellent job at that. But this hard. What punishment can make it right?
The only thing that can make it right is if the preserve the dead woman's body and that it is somehow possible(couple of years later) to use the power of the PMRD device to bring the body back to life again. With condition that it has the absorb someones energy and that person is permanently shrunken to a certain size. The PRMD can still shrink that person, but he/she will never regain full hight again. Corey can than spend the rest of his life at 7 inch tall, but he will have saved that woman. A noble sacrifice. But that's just my idea.
I wonder how this story will develop.
[Report This]Date: September 14 2015 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is very different than your other 'Oversight' story, 'Short Weekend'. In that other story, the punishment is too hard and meanspirited in my eyes.
In this one, he deserves it. If I did what Corey did, I would accept almost every punishment those four women want to dish out. I wouldn't hold it against them.
[Report This]Date: September 14 2015 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was quite interesting! I at first was confused, as it took me a moment to realize the universe, but I do like what you have started here now. I cannot help, but feel sorry for Corey!
Date: September 14 2015 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Seems like a decent start, I can't imagine how Corey must feel.
Date: September 14 2015 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's great to see you back after so long!
This is an interesting start to your story. It could go anywhere, and I'll definitely follow it to wherever it goes!