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Reviewer: 489518 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2020 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please continue this! There's so much potential here. I come back to this story all the time.

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2019 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very good, please continue this where he makes his Mom huge ;)

Reviewer: D-man72 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 04 2018 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope you continue this story soon, I would love to see where this leads.

Reviewer: Friskyavacado Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2017 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Would love to see this story continued, this is one of my favorite plots

Reviewer: Lil Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love this :D Continue ! 

Reviewer: Gaim17 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2016 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Will you add more to this story soon?



Author's Response:

I do plan on adding more, don't worry! Things are just super busy right now so I haven't had much time to think about it. 

Reviewer: drgnfire2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2016 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please continue  story 

Good stuff so far 

Reviewer: hal0083 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story!

I want to read the continuance of this story.

Reviewer: paerslemone Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really like this so far.

Reviewer: Jthm22 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2015 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Off to a good start. It would be nice if his sister had some friends, friends with sisters that could grow as well

Reviewer: graysky123 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2015 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good title choice and great writing. I hope to continue enjoying this story.

Reviewer: dycemist Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2015 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the premise, and you have a very smooth writing style. Can't wait to see where this story goes.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2015 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please continue I am also enjoying it :)

Reviewer: christiawi9 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting story. I'm liking it. Please continue.

Reviewer: Gaim17 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2015 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very enjoyable. More please!!

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