Date: December 29 2017 1:35 PM Title: A Great End to an Even Better Weekend
Hooray! A suitably happy ending for the old year. And I hope you have a happy new one.
:-)
Date: December 28 2017 9:55 AM Title: A Great End to an Even Better Weekend
I can't believe I stuck around even though none of this was even a fetish of mine. I guess I just liked the way you told your story.
I wish it wasn't over. Is this a completed story now? Or will you be adding to this story later on? Or will there be another story, a part 2?
There are many possibilities with these characters are they seem to have a good relationship.
I am curious about other things she will do to John when he is small again. We just got to wait and see.
I can't wait for your next chapter/story!
Author's Response: There are plans for a sequel, coming in 2018 with some things that I can't reveal too much right now but there are plans for a sequel. I did leave it open ended in case the masses asked to not make a sequel. And I'm also glad you stuck around even if it wasn't your taste. I hope to keep everyone entertained when this sequel drops. So see you all then :)
Date: November 13 2017 1:09 PM Title: Prologue
Omg!!! This story had me absolutely captivated beyond belief! :) the only 1 part I really had a problem with? Was running out of next chapters. Haha :) truly brilliant... even to this blind man, who read the entire story on a refreshable braille display! My fingers never had such a workout! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading the story, it means a lot and it means a lot that you kept reading to the end(for now). Appreciate it :)
Date: November 09 2017 10:14 PM Title: A pedicure for her and a wild ride for him
I just binge-read this whole story.
Not bad. After reading the title, description and tags, I thought this would be a story that covers everything. After reading chapter 1, I realized that isn't the case.
The focus is on Gaby and her friends for the majority of the story. Unfortunately, I haven't found their characters that interesting. They seem to have the cliche teen-crush for any guy that they have. Usually, that's good for most stories, but I think I was expecting something different.
John is good. Has a fetish and is exploring his fantasies and I like that. His fantasy seems a bit limited, but hey, if he likes it that much, I don't blame him.
Then I thought Jenny might bring something else to the table, but instead, John convinced her to treat him like all the other girls did.
Rachel is my favorite character. She is mysterious and presents a new personality compared to most stories. Usually, the older sibling would be a mean girl, but I'm impressed that you made her a likeable character who seems reasonable.
I think I might have a thing for Abigail since I love yoga women, and she had a great butt scene. Shame she doesn't get much time with John and shame that she didn't see him. Would loved to see some interaction with her.
Also, it seems that you are on the fence with Abigail. While most stories on this site use the "let's sleepover, my parents are gone" idea, I'm glad you kept the mom in this. However, you haven't brought her into the story completely and just put her in the background just so John could imagine a worse fate. I like surprises and Rachel was one of them.
If Abigail could get a chance too, I think it could improve the story, but that's just my opinion. Her character despises men, but I have this feeling she might like a tiny guy becuase he can't leave like a normal guy. She may hate bugs and men, but that doesn't mean she will hate a bug-sized guy. Who knows, maybe she misses a man, and that's why she works out. Perhaps, she will take interest in John.
Let's just say that if I was John, I would have stayed with Abigail. The fear of what she might do with him brings some thrills for me.
This story is good, but I think it could be great.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks Speedy for the long, very detailed review, means a lot. Not many people leave reviews such as this.
Your comments are a tad true, I had a plan starting out around the mall chapter and later on what I wanted to include which had John actually interact with Abigail, Rachel and Jenny more but I changed it around for time and lack of vision on where to take the story after because it would've had a different structure than it does now. If I could go back and change it back to my old vision, I might.
Date: November 09 2017 10:10 PM Title: A pedicure for her and a wild ride for him
Nice way to avoid the usual cliches! By that, I mean either his discovery by the vindictive beeyotch; or the female boss who might be a frustrated cougar.
Date: October 13 2017 7:50 PM Title: Treats
Something tells me this is going to be the weirdest three-way in the history of gts fanfic.
Author's Response: I hope in good way lol
Date: October 04 2017 11:11 PM Title: Back Safe....for the most part
Nice to see Rachel isn't ALL bad! Even better to see that Joanna's fears about Gaby not remaining loyal to John, if the shrinkage is permanent, were apparently unfounded.
Date: September 22 2017 4:07 PM Title: Rachel's Turn
Hmmmmm! She must have only bound his upper torso. Otherwise, he wouldn't have been able to _walk_ into her mouth. He would've had to _hop_ like a kangaroo in a potato sack race!
Date: September 14 2017 8:30 AM Title: Morning Yoga
Btw: this is now one of my my favoritized stories. :-)
Date: August 30 2017 4:20 PM Title: Morning Yoga
Well, at least the man-hating mother didn't find him. This time around!
Author's Response: We will see if she finds him in a later date, don't you worry ;)
Date: August 30 2017 4:13 PM Title: The Morning After
Whoa! TWO new chapters in one day? Awesome!
Btw: are all the girls in this story raven-haired brunettes?
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it. And no, it hasn't been two chapters in one day. They are usually spread apart by about 6 days or a week. As for the hair color of the girls, the only girls that aren't 'raven haired' are the bullies. Jasmine has lighter hair, Sydney is blonde, Callie has light brown hair and Megan has a slight tint of red to her hair. Hope that clears it up :)
Date: August 30 2017 10:07 AM Title: Morning Yoga
As always, can't wait for the next chapter. This has quickly become one of my favorit stories
Author's Response: Thank you for love, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far :)
Date: August 19 2017 8:24 PM Title: Hidden Demons
PLEASE, let this be a nightmare he's having on the real Sunday night before the spell wears off! :-(
Date: August 13 2017 9:33 PM Title: Down Time
A suitably nice interlude. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: August 09 2017 3:51 PM Title: Fun with Jenny
Whew! No unexpected barge-in's by Abigail. Guess I was being needlessly paranoid.
Author's Response: No, no interruptions from Abigail in this chapter. Not yet. Her time will come. After all, catching a tiny man in her house won't lead to good things for our little protagonist, will it?
Date: August 09 2017 3:48 PM Title: The Sleepover
I know I should be envisioning what erotic things Jenny will be putting him through. But, you've now got me wondering what will happen if (or should I say "when?") Joana's mom finds him.
Author's Response: Abigail's time with John will come soon, don't you worry. She doesn't like ants or men in her house. And a tiny ant sized man? Even worse if John is found by her.
Date: August 03 2017 11:00 AM Title: Prologue
I think this is one of THE greatest giantess stories i've ever read. Great work man. Great work.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words, I certainly try my best to make this story the best I can.
Date: July 30 2017 11:17 PM Title: Reunited
I love Jenny more than Gaby sometimes. Jenny best girl. <3
Date: July 25 2017 7:47 PM Title: The Dangers in the bookstore
Well, at least they didn't find him so irresistible that they wanted to make him their foot-slave, immediately and permanently. Even that bit of gts-interaction can get boring (rather than arousing) when overdone.
In any event; I'm glad you enjoyed that summer vacation. The time off obviously restored your creative juices!
Author's Response: I agree, too much foot slave stuff can get receptive to both read and write. I'm planning out the next chapters with some things that don't have too much to do with feet but it will still be a strong part of the story.
And thanks, I guess time off really helped lol.
Date: July 19 2017 11:39 PM Title: Prologue
Hope you have a really nice time off! You deserve it, good story. Don't burn yourself out writing it all at once.