Date: January 10 2020 9:05 PM Title: White
What was he in exactly?
Author's Response:
In her shoe. : )
Also, I messed up in the previous reply, I meant to say I'm not planning on continuing the story, not finishing because it's finished.
Date: January 10 2020 9:04 PM Title: White
Loved his perspective. I also greatly enjoyed her closing her hand. Imagine being so helpless inside the palm of her hand as it closes. You try to run but there's no where to go as she completely traps you in her fist. One gentle squeeze and you are crushed like a tiny bug.
Please continue this story. Maybe she does a mercy kill and crushes him in her grip.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Hey there, thanks for the review but I'm not planning on finishing this particular story, it was a one shot. Still, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: January 02 2019 6:32 PM Title: White
This was great! I have a question, though. Were/are they romantically involved? It sounded like it and I like that a lot. You should expand on this. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you! But no, I didn't imagine them like that, more of a mistress-pet kind of relationship. Still, I'm happy to hear you've enjoyed it!