Reviewer: Giga_planet_eater Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2019 10:43 PM Title: Redux Chapter 4 - Scrub

I'm so glad this story is continuing. I can't wait to see where it goes next.

Any word on the next chapter?

Author's Response:

Yeah. I've been super busy but I should be catching a break in the next couple days. The next chapter I'm eager to write, but the chapter after that I'm really eager to write, so hopefully I get them done before the week is up. I may have to go dark for another week after, so I'll do my best.

 

Thanks all for reading.

Reviewer: jd1756096 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2019 10:59 AM Title: Redux Chapter 4 - Scrub

Finally Jason in control! Been waiting to see this!

Author's Response:

Hope to have an update Monday, thanks as always for reading!

Reviewer: Mr_M Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2019 9:04 AM Title: Redux Chapter 3 - Games

Well that was... unexpected XD but not unwelcomed. Looking forward to seeing what fun heather has in store, though I’m sensing this version of her is more mellow than the previous one.





Also, Mario Kart 8. That one spammed attack items out the whazoo for everyone not in first place, making it ideal for someone like Ben to “fuck up your day” :P

Author's Response:

That one was the Item Game for sure. Fun but frustrating as hell.

Reviewer: Mcfuzzy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2019 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds

Hey again I'm the guy who made an account just to give you a review back when you first started the story. just want to say geat work with the new chapter! and the new timeline idea. I had hoped you would do something of the sort since in the original story there was a lot of build up to Heather and Jason growing but we only got a little bit at the end. But now it feels the story is as it was meant to be. excelent work!

Author's Response:

Thank you. You're right, the original story was tilted toward shrinking and not so much growth. I hope to tilt things in the other direction with this new iteration, but certainly expect a bit of both! Enjoy.

Reviewer: Mr_M Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2019 11:29 AM Title: Redux Chapter 1 - Debut

I thought the site glitched for a moment when I saw one of my favorite stories at the top of the Most Recent page but I'm glad you're trying a new direction. I can't wait to see what new scenerios you have in store.

Author's Response:

Ha! Yeah maybe I'm the one that glitched. There were too many directions for the story to go. I figure, why start a brand new story to explore those directions when really I've got the framework right here ready to be hijacked, yknow? 

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2019 1:00 PM Title: Ending 2 - The Goddess

Amazing! I'd love a spin off from the point of view of someone living in the civilization on the sole of Heather's foot...wrinkles that look like mountain ranges.

Author's Response:

Ha! That does sound pretty great.

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2019 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Ring

(LMAO At that caption at the end)

But what a mind blowing chapter! Now I don’t even know how I feel about Heather anymore. I almost kind of feel bad for her… Since she was grown in a lab, with no real parents, I feel like this has caused a severe disconnection to her humanity. She sometimes lacks the basic compassion and understanding for other humans, although she miraculously loves Ben. She craves Ben’s love in return, so maybe Ben is using this to his advantage? I’m not sure yet. (Btw, so when she threatened to squash him with a hammer if he didn’t drink the “permanent” shrinking supplement, she was just trying to stop him from shrinking any further, since it's technically not really “permanent” because there’s still an antidote, right?) I just feel bad for Heather because she truthfully believes she’s a good person and she’s doing the right thing, but at the same time, she’s still dangerous. I wonder what’s really going through Ben’s mind right now though, because something tells me he has a trick up his sleeve. Also I wonder what she did with Jason?

Again, great chapter! You’ve literally got me hanging on the edge of my seat now! I’m low-key sad that you say it’s coming to an end soon because it’s just so freakin good! D:

Author's Response:

Your comment really nails all the various points about her character. I'm working on five alternate endings right now that push each character slightly in one direction to see what end result it produces.

Heather isn't Carter's biological daughter, but she wasn't necessarily lab grown. She could have been an implanted embryo carried by a surrogate. I have a bit more of her backstory and Carter's in my mind, but I'm not too sure it's actually worth spelling out every last point.

Heather threatened him because she desperately wants him to submit to her authority, and conventional methods just weren't working. Like Jason, she actually does want Ben to freely choose to submit to her. He just wasn't choosing what she wanted. So she fucking flipped out.

Reviewer: Curvograph Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2019 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Ring

Let me first apologise for leaving a review only after 20 chapters have already been published. I have been following your story since its beginning and was increasingly impressed by its quality. Although most chapters are shorter than I usually prefer, you skillfully balanced plot, character development and kinky stuff, so denser division presented no pacing issues. Your writing style combined with gripping storyline resulted in an engaging story, updates of which I anxiously await not only for its size-related content, but out of sheer curiosity how your protagonists' fate will unfold.

What is worth mentioning, your story is quite bold and on the kinkier side of things (even considering the website you are posting it on) and delves into some underexplored areas. As original concepts and unorthodox thinking should be rewarded, a deserving 10,5/10

 

Author's Response:

Thank you, that really means a lot. I expect to have the story fully wrapped up by the end of this week. Hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2019 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Stowaway

AYOOO! Looks like my theory was correct lol. And, YAY, Ben finally got someone’s attentions! Now let’s see if Jason will let them both grow back or will he keep his 2 new little pets/worshipers like this forever…? ;) lol 

 

Author's Response:

Good guess!

Reviewer: burrito Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2019 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds

I look forward to more of your writing.