[Report This]Date: April 29 2021 5:11 AM Title: Some Guy
Man I've forgotten about this story from ages ago. Glad to see you still around!
[Report This]Date: April 29 2021 4:22 AM Title: Some Guy
OOoooh, this is soooo gooooddddd......
Date: April 28 2021 3:42 AM Title: A New Home
Yesss a new chapter I knew you were still out there. This a terrific story and I can't wait to find out Riley's fate
[Report This]Date: March 26 2019 7:06 PM Title: Riley Shut In
Man, you're like a machine. You're pumping out these chapters out so frequently, and I love it.
Personally, I'm waiting for Riley to get much bigger. That bottom-less stomach of hers is going to get someone hurt -- and I can't wait for that moment! Really interested in her mood swings and how that's going to affect those around her the bigger she gets.
Author's Response:
Riley's mood swings, in the long run, will affect many more than those close to her. Even Riley's most basic problems will become an issue for many down the line!
Let me know if there's anything you want to see in the story!
Date: March 26 2019 11:23 AM Title: The Beginning
Following every update. Love this story :) !
Would love to see some foot related content now that she is bigger. And also since you have described lot of her bodily functions (like burping and stuff) could you add some sneezing ? An arrogant, not well manered girl like her sneezing giganticly all over the place... would be funny I think :D
Author's Response:
I'll see what I can do. I like how intense mundane actions are from a giant girl, and want to be able to get that across.
Date: March 25 2019 2:47 AM Title: The Beginning
Really loving the pacing. Most stories, at least to my taste rush things too much. This is going just the right speed. Keep it up, good stuff.
Author's Response:
I hope to be able to get across the feel of a girl slowly, inexorably growing. I think that's more exciting that exploding to a hundred feet. I'm glad you like the story!
[Report This]Date: March 23 2019 8:05 AM Title: The Beginning
Been meaning to post a review for a while, but never got around to it. One thing I really like is how believable you made Ruley to be. Despite how domineering she acts due to her size, she acts unstable and downright vulnerable in numerous cases. It feels right considering how a teenager does not have a full grasp on how the world truly works. They can act like they know, but there will be a point where they're lost and feel afraid.
Best thing of all is that she genuinely cares about Tommy. She could easily discard him for another crowd, but she's adamant on being with him forever. It's heartwarming to see that she didn't forget who was with her in her darkest times. Her methods may be... questionable, but she has good intentions for him.
Super happy this gets updated super frequently and with quality too. Can't wait for future updates!
Author's Response:
Riley has good intentions for Tommy! We're going to see how she handles her new perspective, especially as it's constantly changing!
I figure that I kind of just jumped into it a little. I want to try to make a little bit of a nuanced growth story in this case. I'm glad that you're looking forward to more updates!
[Report This]Date: March 17 2019 5:42 PM Title: Another Day-Another Reporter Breaking Into the School
Great story so far can’t wait to see more. I hope Riley ends up getting really big and dominat. Will she end up being bigger than cities like a goddess?
Author's Response:
We'll see how big she gets. One thing's for sure-she's not satisfied with her current size.
[Report This]Date: March 17 2019 3:42 PM Title: Another Day-Another Reporter Breaking Into the School
Whoa. This is a great story. Great character development. I love how everyone is swooning over Riley, and how Riley's ego is getting bigger than her stature. I really can't wait to see her much bigger. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Her ego's growing a lot certainly! It doesn't seem like anyone will be able to keep her under control...
[Report This]Date: March 15 2019 9:18 PM Title: Awakening
Amazing
Author's Response:
I'm glad you think so!
[Report This]Date: February 21 2019 11:09 PM Title: No Normal Growth Spurt
Great Story Bob Charlie!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Tell me if there's anything that you want to see in it!
[Report This]Date: February 12 2019 7:24 AM Title: The Beginning
Oh, what a find! Massive growth spurts on puberty, my favorite kind of story. I liked Riley, especially because she is eager to grow more. Over confidence at such age is a plus.
Thank you for the first chapter.
Author's Response:
She's definitely confident, to say the least. We'll see how that confidence changes as she grows bigger!
Date: February 03 2019 10:37 AM Title: The Beginning
Great concept, looking good so far.
I hope this gets finished.
Author's Response:
I haven't done great at finishing my stories, although I want to go back to conclude the Small Sisters some time.
Date: January 27 2019 6:47 PM Title: The Beginning
Nicely written so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Let me know if there's anything you want to see out of it. I was thinking of doing a lot. of the story from Riley's point of view as well!