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Reviewer: Omanahan88 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2020 2:03 PM Title: Arrival

Really fun story! Hope to see the next chapter soon!

Reviewer: TheGiantessArchives Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2020 4:36 PM Title: Arrival

I am in love with this story and am patiently awaiting details. That toilet scene had me on the edge of my seat ( pun intended ) thinking he's dead, there's no way out of this. How the FUCK, Then ashlynn got him and it was sooo good. You have amazing writing please please get another chapter out soon I can't wait to see where this goes! 

Reviewer: jenadhy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2020 4:52 PM Title: Arrival

Will there be F/fm, will Mrs. Brooks appear?

Author's Response:

She will appear again, but I'm not sure how yet. Kinda making this up as I go.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2020 12:57 AM Title: Arrival

Nice story so far



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: RI_Weeb Signed [Report This]
Date: February 29 2020 8:28 PM Title: Arrival

Amazing start can't wait to see what's next! 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 29 2020 3:26 PM Title: Arrival

Really good stuff. The flattening aspect has some interesting ramifications. I'd would be fun to see him be truly forgotten and mixed in with toe jam, or having slipped down from th e lower back end up ground right into the creases of one of their buttholes.

 

Maybe later on the girls could borrow the device and shrink him even smaller so he doesn't get in the way of their fun. Maybe his trip out of the park could be between the fibres of one of those well worn socks.



Author's Response:

So many possibilities! I'll see where it takes me. There will definitely be some butt stuff.

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2020 5:16 PM Title: Arrival

Great start! Love it so far, though I'm very excited to see the Butt tag come into play. Having him in a butt during a roller coaster might be interesting. I also want to see Ashlynn get to play with him. Maybe Maddie enjoying him between her toes will make Ashlynn jealous enought to want a turn



Author's Response:

There will definitely be butt stuff ahead!

Reviewer: FTFeet Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2020 10:22 PM Title: Arrival

Looking good!



Author's Response:

THanks!

Reviewer: Joseph Micheal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2020 7:57 PM Title: Arrival

I enjoyed your other stories, and based on what I've seen so far I'll definitely enjoy this one too. It has a fun premise and interesting characters, and your writing style is perfect for it. I would be lying if I said I didn't want to see Mrs. Brooks and her friends take him though...



Author's Response:

Thanks! I might work back around to that.

Reviewer: LittleRomance Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 20 2020 11:18 AM Title: Arrival

Will this have some gentle or romance? 

I hope so...I feel bad for poor zach and I hope stays nice.  And she secretly likes him. 

Interesting idea man keep it up 



Author's Response:

I wasn't planning on it, but only because I can't really write romance. But I'll see where it leads.

Reviewer: Medrinisoc Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2020 1:10 AM Title: Arrival

Its a great start to the story so far. Looking forward to more details about his experience, especially down at Maddie's feet. Would love to see the nonchalance continue, maybe even some borderline unaware parts where they forget or disregard him. Love all the sensory details.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback! I plan to do all of this, although it usually takes me a long time to update or finish stories.

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