[Report This]Date: June 19 2020 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nooooo.....why....that's horrible...I wanted her to at least die so she could be with liam... 😔😔😔 danm it....
Can you at least please to them getting together in another life epilogue or something? Please? Or an alternative ending?
Date: June 17 2020 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love the plot twists. Keep it up.
Would have been nice if Emily looked at all the skeletons in her poop the next morning, and counted dozens if not houndreds of tinies that she ate, digested, then had passed through her bowels.
[Report This]Date: June 17 2020 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was actually....very heart breaking.....I do hope you have an epilogue where they come together as a couple in another life...
Very sad chapter....
Date: June 14 2020 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love Love Love how Emily instantly went from disgust to total enjoyment.
If Emily isn't going to get exposed, either by the restaurant or the police, she is going to have to hide her tracks by getting the police chief shrunk, then finish off the guy in the jar who witnessed her. If she does not, her secret is out.
Hope to read more about Emily's experience on her toilet the next day or two.
As for Liam, he can always be reswallowed. Perhaps even by Lily whom he seems to adore.
[Report This]Date: June 14 2020 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really liked the setup of the first couple chapters, the concept of using vore as an extraction tool to save the shurnken people was unique and interesting among giantess stories. However, Emily's complete switch in mindsent in Chapter 4 was quite jarring to me. It didn't seem to fit with the character that was set up earlier.
I guess we'll see where the story goes in the future, but it seems like it's thrown away the unique plotline for a more typical giantess scenario.
[Report This]Date: June 14 2020 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well this got...horrible...I hope liam's survives....and poor emily is going to be so guilty.....and i hope this doesn't go the rout of her being completely fine with murdering a bunch of people. Emily is a good person and I hope she dosent become like those 2 other girls...
[Report This]Date: June 11 2020 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic. You've set up a very interesting world with this story. I personally like the dynamic set up with Liam and Emily. Part of me hopes Emily is the one to finish the "job" with him in the end. Either way it seems the chief sure doesn't care what happens to him. I look forward to seeing where you go with this story!
Date: June 08 2020 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Very HOT! Can't wait to read about Emily's involvement, or did I already?
[Report This]Date: June 06 2020 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great Story, Please continue and don't give up on this story please. I see a lot of potential
Author's Response:
Don't worry, I never give up on a story.
Date: June 05 2020 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh my i love this idea haha i cant wait for more keep up the great work!
Date: June 05 2020 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome! Will there be some hard vore/gore? The tiny people may not all be served whole or intended to be eaten that way all the time. Would love to see some unaware scenes aswell.
Author's Response:
Yup, there will be a scene with hard vore.
[Report This]Date: June 05 2020 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far I can not wait to see where this story goes. :)