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Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2020 3:15 AM Title: A very controversial arrival

I'd suggest formatting this better, everything is squashed together and makes it hard to read properly. 



Author's Response:

Yes this is my first time ever using this story thank you for commenting.  On my deviantart page it is more spread out.

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