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Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2020 11:39 AM Title: Drive-Thru

This yarn, Vintovka, really captured my attention, and the end was great! I only wished as I read it, that there would be a little more by describing your thoughts of being consumed and becoming part of that gorgeous giantess's body.  Okay, you are so min iscule that she would hardly have felt you being absorbed. However, it was a good little yarn.  O, and one comment: I would not ac cept that saliver would burn you, unlike the digestive juices awaiting in her belly.



Author's Response:

When being eaten there are no thoughts, only fear and perhaps disbelief at what's happening.

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