[Report This]Date: June 18 2023 3:35 PM Title: Fine Dining
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[Report This]Date: May 14 2023 5:29 AM Title: Fine Dining
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[Report This]Date: May 14 2023 5:29 AM Title: Fate of the Defeated
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[Report This]Date: May 13 2023 10:03 PM Title: Fate of the Defeated
author is promoting slavery disgusting ;/////
+ bad story
[Report This]Date: May 13 2023 10:00 PM Title: Loving Arms
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[Report This]Date: May 13 2023 9:58 PM Title: Fate of the Defeated
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[Report This]Date: October 19 2022 7:44 PM Title: Lucky Blue
If you have apprehensions about going for something as dark as rape it's totally understandable. I've certainly got a humble suggestion that could help avoid it in a reasonable but engaging fashion that still fits the darkness of this world.
Marisa could continue to be resistant, which would cause Galea to essentially order Richard to do the deed. Marisa's owners may also reluctantly agree to this method albeit not being very threatening to Marisa as they are more inclined to pamper her due to their noble background.
Richard could continue to refuse despite increasingly intimidating threats by Galea, who could mention she could easily sell him off as livestock to be consumed or eat him herself along with other detailed threats. Tell him how close he was to being served as a dish before she *bought* him from a kitchen and essentially saved his life. He belongs to her and he shouldn't forget that. She could also highlight how good he has at and remind him about what usually happens to humans in this world and their place on the food-chain should nature take it's course.
It would be a good opportunity to show heroic traits in Richard. Even though he has submitted to Galea in many ways, there are still lines he would never cross even if it meant a slow agonizing death in some hungry elf's belly, even Galea's herself. Perhaps this display of morality and courage could win over Marisa who would genuinely admire him for his bravery in a world where most humans are completely broken and will do anything to survive and not get eaten. This could be her reason give consent.
Everyone gets what they want and perhaps Galea gains a little more respect for Richard. She would certainly still view him as an inferior being and her property, but maybe have a little more interest in his personality and not just his value as a product as well as a bit more affection for him.
Of course it's just an open suggestion and I would be interested in whatever you choose to do. Hope I'm not being too intrusive on your story with my suggestion. I'd like to know what you think? Aside from that this has been a very enjoyable story. I'm generally interested in soft vore and soft vore related teasing / threats so that would probably be my biggest bias for or against things as a reviewer / fan.
Author's Response:
Interesting plot point ideas, here's a few of my thoughts:
I think Richard refusing if it comes down to it is within the bounds of what kind of character I wanted to write, and that is 100% an option for how the story goes. Though I'm less sure if Marisa would admire another human for refusing commands as well (she's more scared of the unknown, as opposed to outright defiant), and Galea would sooner start dishing out punishments before being impressed by one of her pets being defiant.
That doesn't mean that she might not eventually develop a deeper attachment to him than just as a tool, but crossing her isn't how I think Richard will get there. I don't think she'll ever respect him, much in the same way that humans don't really respect their pets, affection sure, but not respect.
And you're not being intrusive! I appreciate feedback, especially when it is as in depth as yours is. Having hardly written anything before now, it's good to see what kind of impression the story is giving off.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2022 10:54 PM Title: Lucky Blue
Great story. Are you going to eventually follow Richard's offspring as they grow up to become pets or food?
Author's Response:
Thanks man, and I don't think I'll ever have a POV other than Richard or Galea's in this story, but his offspring could become characters once/if we get there. If I end up wanting to follow another character, his offspring or otherwise, I'd prob start a new story, as this is really just Richard's (and Galea's) story.
Date: June 15 2022 12:53 PM Title: Lucky Blue
This is a really nice intro, I’ve only read chapter 1 so far but you have a very broad range of vocabulary and adjectives in your writing that really makes it an enjoyable read.
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks my man, glad it is resonating with you.
Date: June 15 2022 4:13 AM Title: Lucky Blue
Interesting to see a story set in the "humanity's subjugation" universe. As usual, elf treatment of humans is horrific. At least Richard got a better deal than most. It's also interesting to see just how the elves produce so many humans to keep up with demand. I wonder if they enchant them to breed and grow faster or something given how long it normally takes for humans to give birth and mature.
Author's Response:
I know there is time magic available in the setting + other magical (or maybe drug) ways of increasing fertility, but that's more for a mass production farm. This one is a bit more specialized, might try to write a visit in to a mass production farm at some point in the story, though.
Date: February 04 2022 11:47 PM Title: Fate of the Defeated
I have mixed feelings about this series. On the one hand, sexy, mini giant elves effortlessly conquering, shrinking, and subjugating humans. On the other hand, the series leans too much into despair fetish territory for my liking. I do like the setting though. I hope you don't mind if I use it as inspiration.
Also, with the new warhammer game rekindling my interest in that series, I can tell you that, lorewise, the 3 elf factions in that game would treat humans more or less exactly like the elves in your setting. The only reason 2 of them don't is because one is super isolationist and the other is too busy fighting with the third faction.
As for Humanity's Downfall, part of me is hoping something happens to shake up the elves. Another part of me is hoping for a bittersweet direction. ie. humans get treated better but are still tiny playthings.
Author's Response:
Good to know I'm not the only one getting hyped for Warhammer 3 haha. The general look of the Empire is loosely based on pseudo rome styles but also takes some from the High Elves.
And hey, if folks are inspired by the setting to do their own thing by all means. I'm generally pretty despair fetish in it, but different strokes for different folks. If ever you wanna talk about that kinda stuff I always welcome it as well!
[Report This]Date: February 03 2022 9:31 PM Title: Fate of the Defeated
Not going to lie a little bummed by the end. Was hoping she would become a pet/toy for a lowly commoner. I am not suprised just a little saddened. Will this empire ever meet the same fait
Author's Response: I mean, if it ever becomes not lewd to me for elves to always win possibly. Not likely anytime soon there!
[Report This]Date: February 02 2022 9:28 PM Title: Fate of the Defeated
Really liking the setup so far. The casual indifference shown to the humans is great!
Author's Response:
Pleased to hear you're liking it, thanks!
[Report This]Date: February 02 2022 6:53 PM Title: Fate of the Defeated
Well that’s a blow to pride isn’t it. I am interested to see where u go with this.
Author's Response:
Just a tiny blow to pride really, fitting for the stature! Glad you are enjoying!
Date: September 21 2021 5:21 PM Title: True Magic
This story tuly was awesome. Btw is Idria breaking the fourth wall in the second chapter or did I just misunderstand?
Date: May 17 2021 4:00 AM Title: True Magic
Great story showing a glimpse of Idria's power. Feel like she is overpowered that even Elfs besides the queen are running around in the palm of her hand. Wonder how normal elfs and humans from unconquered lands feel about the war.
[Report This]Date: May 16 2021 12:12 AM Title: True Magic
Awesome story! It's nice seeing the gap between the upper echelons of elves and the upper echelons of humans. Any chance Rulership will be finished soon?
Date: May 15 2021 5:00 AM Title: True Magic
As interesting as this universe is, Idria seems rather overpowered. I wonder what the empress's view are on things and who the stronger one is between them.
Author's Response:
Hey, not her fault everyone else happens to be underpowered clearly. And who knows on that last bit.
[Report This]Date: January 08 2021 3:00 PM Title: Frontier Hospitality
Excellent story! Leora was definitely cruel to those humans but at least she is a little warmer now..