Date: April 22 2021 1:20 AM Title: Working Out
Interesting, she went from abuse and domination to guilt and coddling in a matter of minutes. Maybe she has something like a disdain or embeded anger towards men, I can't remember if you mentioned what her biological father or Scotts dad were like. And if it has something to do with her complicated relationship with Scott. She does seem to either care for him or have a crush on him, but approaches his shrinking disease with an attitude as if "no woman is allowed to hurt my little brother" because "it's only okay when I do it". I think she's had or developed feelings for him and saw the chance to force herself upon a vulnerable Scott. A mistake for what she intended, but I think she's confused on how to goo about for what she wants.
The teaser at the end has me curious if she's going to open up aboout her feelings or desires that Scott and his shrinking have awakened in her and if she's going to make something like a proposal along the lines of "I promise not to beat you or rape you too make you smaller. I promise I won't let any of the girl's at school hurt you. I... I like you Scott. Please give me a chance to make this better. Please dont tell Mom about this weekend."
Which reminds me Scott's stepmom was concerned for him when she learned he was sick and already around 3 ft tall and was willing to rush back home from halfway across the country. I wonder if she'll suspect something is wrong when she returns to find Scott under or around 1ft. Maybe she'll hear from the news or rumors that sex is what makes men shrink more then half their size. And how she'll react with Jackie knowing she forced herself on her step brother like that.
Author's Response:
Nailed it. Good job! -jsm109