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Reviewer: thoswal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2015 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

One of the best crush stories I've read on here! Finally, a story where the shrinkie is treated like an insect should be....squished.

Reviewer: rich Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2008 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

excellent...please write more!

Author's Response: thank you, will do :)

Reviewer: Stanley Wlliams Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2008 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

A good, well-written story for yourfirst time.

Myself, I prefer insertion and things like that, but your story is well done. You might say a smashing success. Nicole really had a crush on Jason. (I have a reputation for bad jokes,)

This reminded me of a reall-life situation when I was a junior in high school. I liked a certain girl, but she was not very fond of me. So I dated another girl, who I didn't really like, to make the first girl jealous and, hopefully, come to me. She didn't. In fact she said she was happy that I had found someone. Fortunately the second girl and I didn't get along and I ended up marrying a third girl, who is a very good wife. The first girl turned out too be fat and ugly later.



Author's Response: lol, yeah, i know some girls that turned out fat and ugly too.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2008 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

If one afterschool milkshake in a public place, in broad daylight, with a female teenager not one's girlfriend, constitutes cheating on that girlfriend, then I'm glad I never dated in high school. Lol!

Thanks for sharing your debut story with us.

Author's Response: No prob, i plan on writing more about Salene.

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