Date: January 15 2022 3:11 PM Title: Final chapter
I love this story. Binge read it in two days <3. I will check out your other stories now. Your build-up really sold the last Serene chapter, even if would have liked to learn more about this new world.
Date: November 21 2021 10:44 PM Title: Final chapter
Honestly, what happened with this story is the reason why I hate
reader interactive stories. It's a turn-off for the voters who lost and
it also feels like the really dumb options are picked that force some
really stupid choices to be done by the MC. The final chapter especially
suffers from that.
Author's Response:
Honestly, I think interactive stories can work, but I should have narrowed the options. If I had put two options which made sense each time and that I really, really, wanted to explore I think it would have been better.
My next stories won't be interactive nor altered reality for now but who knows, when they'll be finished I could very well have a new one with a MC able to change reality :)