[Report This]Date: December 14 2021 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginnings
I loved this definitely my favourite story it’s upsetting it doesn’t seem like it’s getting any updates but if it does I’d want the shit/fart jar to happen like it said and maybe vore threat or him on a string being swallowed into someone unhygienic and there breath smell but either way I loved it
Date: August 03 2021 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Play Time With Laura
I like the content here a lot, would love to see this chapter from his point of view!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I don't know if I would do that, since a lot of things are unclear to him, like why she suddenly steps on him, or why she seemingly shat her pants on purpose and went to sleep afterwards. I could do a similar situation from his POV tho. He still has to escape his incredibly gross situation in the next chapter somehow.
Date: August 03 2021 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginnings
Amazing details on the environment. Spot on on describing the size difference, and how they can barely hear him. I adored how we got to see a perspective of Laura and thoughts. Excited to see which direction you take this. Can't wait to see the mother in action by his son either being stuck to her sole and lazy to remove him. Or She thinking the safest location to transport him is in her cleavage. So many options,
Loved the way you write wish I had your grammar skills and writing.
Author's Response:
Hey just keep practicing and you'll get there. Unfortunately I'm not really into mom stuff, so you're not gonna see that from me, sorry. The most extreme thing you're gonna see is maybe the mom forcing her daughters to do something to their brother, or her putting him somewhere so his sisters will torture him unawarely. No gross stuff from the mom herself.
Date: August 01 2021 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginnings
Love it! Not often you find slob stories like this where they are truly gross! Love it
Date: June 06 2021 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Smell Hell
Incredible story!!!!!!
Date: June 05 2021 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Smell Hell
Decent story so far. What would make it much better is that, if you made it so that due to the constant exposure to the smell, he begins to like it and get aroused by it. He then wpuld try to hide his excitement, but eventually, the girls find oit, and do stuff to him, that make him very aroused.
Date: June 05 2021 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginnings
I love the new chapter and the new character that came with it, I love this story!!
Date: June 01 2021 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginnings
Loved the new chapter keep up the good work!!
Date: May 28 2021 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginnings
Really love this type of story! Waiting for more extreme stuff in the upcoming chapters.
Date: May 28 2021 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginnings
Great piece of writing! I can't wait to read more of it!
I'm pleased to hear you're going to do more butt stuff, and some unaware characters. You're ticking plenty of boxes for me with this story.
Date: May 16 2021 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginnings
Pleeeeease continues this.!! This is one of the first really good stories I've seen here I love all of it please make another chapter
Author's Response:
I have been busy, sorry! New chapters will be coming soon!
Date: March 29 2021 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginnings
Not bad for a beginner! Hope to add more butts, maybe you can add some friends
Author's Response:
Hey, I just added a new chapter! And yeah, I'm planning to add a lot more butt to it, and a few more characters, maybe some unaware ones 👀
Date: March 29 2021 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginnings
Oh, wow, that's a surprise! It's been many years since I wrote here. I'm glad you enjoyed my stories. I would like to submit more some day - I've had something on the back-burner for some time, but I can't make any promises as to when it'll be ready.
Date: March 28 2021 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginnings
Not into rart stuff personally, but the sister setting, the size difference, sweat, ass stuff, and the lax approach to hygiene are all big plusses for me, so I'm excited to see where you take this
Author's Response:
Hey thanks, I actually read your stories and they, among others, have inspired me to write my own! I don't want to pressure you, but it would be cool if you started writing stories again!