[Report This]Date: August 09 2021 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: The State of the World
That's great news! Wish this website had a better format for chatting between authors. Do you think you'll have enough to start posting in august?
Author's Response:
Not sure about August, but maybe September -- maybe. It feels close but I'm not sure. Currently 24 finished chapters with a bunch of unfinished/unformatted material across the entire story. It's been slightly more difficult than the first one because I'm trying some new things.
[Report This]Date: July 06 2021 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: The State of the World
Any progress on the sequel?
Author's Response:
Thanks for your interest, johnmith! So far the first 9 chapters are done. I plan to start posting once most of the story is finished, so I can stick to a weekly posting schedule, as I did with the first one, and finish the remainder of the story during the weeks I post. Wish I could give you an estimate as to post date, but I can't guess at this stage. But writing output has been pretty consistent so far, so hopefully shouldn't take too long. In the meantime I am happy to give future updates.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2021 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: The State of the World
I definitely support a sequel, though not with the sizes you teased in the epilogue. I'd hope that was just a nightmare and he's actually still the same size in this. I find the interaction to be perfect in this round. I could see you continuing their relationship and how they evolve as a couple. What would a proposal, wedding plans look like. How would she feel about his fame? I'd imagine more and more news crews would want to get a piece of him. Then of course there's your best character, the vet. I'd want to see her with a bigger role. Perhaps Stuart's relationship didn't work out and he's dropped off with her. I wonder how Jen would react seeing him there with the Vet as her little assistant. All sorts of theories she'd like to test out with him. Could even do a chapter or two with just them. SO many possibilities :)
Author's Response:
I appreciate the interest in a sequel! Can't say too much about the plot, but Jerry will be very small briefly in the beginning but in a way that keeps the interaction and content style intact, as much as possible. However, most of the plot events will require him to be at least mouse size again.
[Report This]Date: June 18 2021 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 1: The State of the World
That was great! I hope it doesn't end here, a few more epilogue chapterss would be awesome!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Smallerworld, I'm glad you liked the story!
[Report This]Date: June 16 2021 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: The State of the World
Great story. Thanks for spending the time and effort to make it. I'm really hoping for a sequel with Jerry at his new size.
Author's Response:
Thank you for spending the time and effort to read it and leave feedback! The story was a lot easier to write than many of my other stories, sometimes felt like I was transcribing a movie I'd just watched, rather than inventing things. I would write it all over again if I could (lucky my harddrive never crashed, so I don't have to). I'm not going to do that, but I am seriously considering writing a sequel as another excuse to return to the story. So we'll see!
[Report This]Date: June 04 2021 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: The State of the World
Yup. This is the best story on this site, and IMO, on par with my other favorite story, nexifem. Thank you for this treat Zerda, and see you next week, hopefully ;)
Date: June 02 2021 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: The State of the World
I like that he's back with Jenny again and her possessive attitude. Really enjoy the humliation aspects with her. Hopefully insertion comes into play with her, but this teasing is as equally as good in my opinion.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. I never know how people are going to respond to the characters, so it means a lot that people like them and want to see more of them. As for your other concern, I don't really know what to say, so I'll just let this quote from the story speak for itself:
"She chased me eternal, and even seemed to enjoy it, but that’s not what she really wanted. A chase was useless without getting the cheese at the end [...]"
[Report This]Date: May 26 2021 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: The State of the World
I really enjoyed the dynamic of Jen, Jerry and Stuart. I know you said that there wouldn't be more of it, but I thought it was a well written chapter when he was humilatingly used like that for their pleasure.
Date: May 21 2021 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: The State of the World
Uh, is this gonna get better anytime soon? Tags had gentle, but so far all there is humiliation and abuse, and now it has extra drama.
Author's Response:
The tone of the story is set to be fairly consistent, including the humiliation stuff
Date: April 20 2021 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: The State of the World
Can't wait for what is to come. Hope it is just jerry and jenn in the future though
[Report This]Date: April 14 2021 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: The State of the World
Amazing premise, big fan of the two main characters. I see you posted a lot of 1 chapter stories just now. This is by far the best and hope you continue it.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I try to make characters who are each different and memorable. I plan on continuing the stories I've posted, including this one.