[Report This]Date: July 05 2021 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 1: Devour
To be honest I don't really like rampage stories because they are usually pretty mindless with little to no character development. I'm usually drawn to character driven stories because I'm a hopeless romantic who likes to see people change for the better. This story is seems to be evolving from just being a rampage story into being so much more. Those feelings the Devourer is developing are what keep me reading. I'm hoping they are coming from her heart because I would love to watch as she developes emotions and feelings (hopefully even romantic ones ;)) while she goes from being a monster to being an empathetic person. Regardless, just keep up the good work! I know my hopes are high but I feel like you can make this story even better. Godspeed!
Author's Response:
First of all thank you very much for giving my story a read, and I have to agree with you to an extent when it comes to rampage stories. I mean I like them but I want my stories to have a purpose, not just mindless destruction. But I'm afraid that my story will have those rampages from time to time. I mean the main character is a cosmic goddess that Devourers planets, right? Either way I hope you continue to read the story.
[Report This]Date: June 23 2021 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Devour
So it looks like her majesty is resorting to a kamikaze attack. I get the feeling that it won't do much to harm the Devourer, but maybe I'm wrong and it could actually do some damage. Curious as to how she will interact with the survivors, assuming she can communicate with them in a way that is safe for them.
Overall, interesting story concept so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for your support, got any advice always happy to hear.