Date: March 06 2017 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue
I absolutely loved this. I hope to see more of Alice and her shrinking fantasies soon
[Report This]Date: March 01 2015 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue
A most delightfully quirky conclusion for an x-rated work, albeit there's been spelling and grammar mistakes all through the story, which has led to quite a bit of pausing to deduce what was meant to be said.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the reviews mate. I'm sorry about all the spelling, this was the first thing I wrote, about 7 years ago, maybe more. I think my story Small Doses is much better. But I do have issues in most of my life with spell checking etc. Trust me.
[Report This]Date: December 26 2012 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue
is there going to be an sequal to this story i really cant wait for 1 if there is going to be one
[Report This]Date: April 06 2009 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue
Read thsi just now for the second time.
As I'm now registered I thougth too say a great story you have written here.
And one of the aspects I liked the most that Alice didn't turn evil (more then a tiny but).
Great work.
Author's Response: I've never quite got the *poof* she's evil thing. It perforates a lot of stories on here and I don't think its realistic. Many people wouldn't react all ultra-violent if these situations occurred in real life....Well I don't think so anyway.Thanks for your positive comments, feedback is pretty minimal on this forum.Keep it Premium