Somewhat long-winded but the initial impressions of the premise are positive overall, however there are a few cases where spelling and grammar cause confusion, also one character's name is used where another is meant. Lastly, don't use brackets in place of apostraphes and quotes.

Not usually a fan of mega gts stories but this is probably one of my favourite gts stories ever.

First the bad points: okay you're probably gonna kill the next person who mentions spelling but sorry it was a bit of a distraction to an otherwise incredible story.

Next the length is both good and bad, bad because this really is novel length and good for the same reason. It does allow for great character development and descriptive scenes.

Last, though this is more of a personal taste thing, her great size. For me, when people start to become half an inch or less (comparitively speaking) interaction starts to become meaningless and a bit unbelievable. Kate's other superpowers like her hearing and sense of touch did help a lot with suspension of disbelief, but as I read it I can't help but think of her largest size to be no more than 500 feet. But that's just me being picky.

The good points outweigh everything else. Some may disagree but I liked the detail that went into some of the scenes and it really helped give a good feel of the sense of scale Kate had. The action scenes were great and so was the character interaction and development. I thought the ways she kept herself entertained and occupied with her little routines showed great creativity. Size not withstanding, Katie is probably one of the most believable and likeable story characters I've come across. There were times when I thought she was just like a real teenage girl chilling in her room - which just so happened to be a weapons silo. The only time I didn't empathise with her was how she acted when the army attacked her. It was understandable and I have no problem for the most part. But she just overstepped the mark just that little bit too much, which is why she lost Amy as a friend. That was a shame too because I loved the relationship they had it was really sweet and I personally wish that was explored further rather than introducing her boyfriend. But stories gotta go with the flow and I guess I'm being picky again. Maybe you could write an alternate storyline? (I keed, I keed)

Altogether a fantastic piece of work.

What I like about this is that you are trying to tell a story, that involves a giant woman.  Most people are trying indulge fantasies while telling a story, and it doesn't always work.  Makes me proud to be an author.

hay its me again this is the onley way i know to give you a messige thanks the typo thing i just though when you ment a meter i just though a meter X1000 but thinks any way. i just have three quisons for you.first one is how hot is the heat inside kate and how hot is her blood? two you think you will do another novel about kate? last one some where in chapter 10 kate is swimming and sed she doesn't need to breath air but doesn't she need air to talk to work the vocal cords. i hope you don't think this is insalt to you it just some curious questens i had. thankyou for anster them.

Author's Response:

All you have to do is click on my pin name and then the contact link. Then you can send me your questions through email.

For your questions, the closer you get to Kate's heart the hotter it gets. Given the amount of energy her body generates it would be on par with if not more then the heat generated by a modern nuclear reactor.

No, I don't see me writing another novel about Kate. I had planned on it but then I began writing Lucy's story. To me Lucy in the inescapable guardian is everything that Kate was meant to be. So to me she's a far superior lady and giantess.

Kate only needs air as a medium to transmit sound waves and a few other things. However, it doesn't have to be air. Water is capable of transfering soundwaves as well.

This story never ceases to amaze me. I read it a while back and even made it to chapter 8 (where it was posted on other forums) before having to crash a little while from so much information. But I recently re-read it and it is just absolutely amazing.
From the excruciating details to the incredibly well-thought of scenerios, you can easily plant the image in your head as to what's going on.
I, personally, am a huge fan of long stories. I hate little stories that do nothing but cause arousal for the reader. Usually novels such as this don't get much glory but I'm glad to see the previous reviews because the author here definitely deserves it.
Props to you, my friend. ;)

Author's Response: I would have liked to respond sooner but I didn't know this web site was back up. Or did it ever go down? I thought it had.

I'm glad that you enjoyed the story and even enjoyed it's magnitude. I recently added the final chapters nine and ten. So now the complete story is all here.

First off, i´m not a fan of gentle so far, being Hedin to be my favorite writer.

But this story, or should i rather call it epic, is just awesome. As the name says, it´s about her life, hence very long. I just hit the half part mark, but so far it got me hooked. The amount of work you must´ve put into this i can´t even imagine. There are a few lenghts, like when you say a friend is coming and somehow you still want to draw out the time to introduce them ( i.e. by writing about her doing this or that instead of hitting the point ) is both frustration ( as it kept me from finally getting tot he "real deal" ) as also ups the excitement what will happen when said person arrives.

Only drawback i had was some spelling mistakes, like close instead of clothes ( close = distance/near, while clothes are the Shirt or skirt you wear on your body ) that sadly rather often threw me out of the grip the story had me in just to re-read the sentence to actually figure out what was ment/worded.

But even with that this thing is just great!