Reviews For Omega: Animus
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Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2022 4:44 AM Title: Ready

Only saw one major flaw with this chapter, it was too short.  Eagerly awaiting the next installment.

Author's Response: Most of the chapters in this story will be longer. This is just more of a setup scene. Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: kenrios Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2022 2:12 AM Title: Ready

Oh, wow! This gets more and more interesting. Wow, this chapter was a bit short but it contains some important news. That party Evelyn is throwing, wow, I have to read it. Jack please follow this story please don't abandon it. If you can, finish it, it is a very good story. Every time I read it I have a need for more. That Lexi encounter with the Omegas will be crucial. Let's see to what extent Alpha has overcome her fears. I imagine there will be some of the most important people in the Omega universe. Like Claire, Jenna and Melody. Oh crap! I'm already guessing again. Even so, I still worry about Bridget's situation, if that torment causes the Fire to awaken in her it will be fatal. Let's see what comes of all this.



Author's Response: I 100% guarantee that this story will be finished.

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