[Report This]Date: May 25 2022 4:39 AM Title: Kin
Stellar work, as always. I honestly wondered what Alma's role would be in this story when we started focused on her and Jenna - who really is both frightening and distasteful as a human being also, but I wonder if it is her fault of a sad result of how Omega were created.
I'll be interesting to see Lexi going to seek out Bridget now, even if I expect her sister to still put up quite a fight instead of giving in to her wish to come back home.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. And yes, it's a fair guess that the story's not just going to end happily ever after right there as soon as Lexi and Bridget are in a chapter together.
[Report This]Date: May 25 2022 1:19 AM Title: Kin
Oh, wow. It's... wow, I'm speechless. I can't even imagine the amalgamation of emotions I felt when I read this chapter. Despite the way Alma expressed herself, something still made me feel sorry for her. It is that behind everything she said to her daughter, as you wrote Jack, there were traces of truth and simply Alma used these grains to plant the seeds of doubt and her twisted thoughts of her in her daughter. But I don't know, I felt sorry for Alma. Maybe it's because she pushes away the only person who could love her somehow I don't know... Wow, fantastic story. I didn't think you'd update it so soon Jack. And it seems that the long-awaited meeting between Bridget and Lexi is approaching. Another thing that surprised me... Jenna musical artist, seriously? Wow that introduces a personality trait of hers that she didn't know about. How mysterious is the soul of this character.
In short Jack keep it up. This Omega universe is really exciting and full of many good stories. Thanks for following this story, friend.
Author's Response: Alma may be evil by basically any standard, but she believes everything she says, and she knows how to manipulate people. And yes, while Jenna is intense, she has some complexity to her for sure. Thanks for reading.