Reviews For Omega: Animus
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Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2022 4:14 AM Title: Turntable

Stellar writing as always!


Can’t wait to find out Bridget’s plan… the suspense is killing me!



Author's Response: We'll get some (but not all) answers next chapter

Reviewer: kenrios Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2022 11:06 PM Title: Turntable

Damn suspense xd. I think we are reaching if not the climax at least a crucial moment in this story. Bridget seemed very determined that her solution would be the final one but I don't think what I'm thinking of happened in such a short amount of time. I guess we'll have to wait and see what happens. Jacksmith is not a predictable author at all and I suspect that he has a surprise prepared for us hahaha



Author's Response: "Crucial moment" is a good way to put it.

Reviewer: titanic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2022 5:12 PM Title: Turntable

Is Bridget gonna try and get Kayla to make her a Beta (or maybe an Alpha, but Beta feels more likely)? It seems like the kind of drastic thing she'd want to do, given her mental state. I guess she could also try and get Kayla to make Lexi an Omega, but that feels less likely.

Also, Lexi seems a bit off with the whole lightning strike analogy. It's an apt comparison for what initially happened, but Bridget's response to the situation involved a bunch of conscious decisions. She decided to go through with the punishment, she decided to not believe Lexi. The lightning strike comparison ignores that Bridget had agency.



Author's Response: I won't say what Bridget's thinking here, but it's definitely fair at this point to be wondering whether or not Lexi is too quick to simplify the damage done, like with that analogy

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