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Reviewer: emshoshoshenis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2022 9:06 AM Title: The Bet

great



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2022 11:28 PM Title: The Bet

Oh wow

Now this one was dark.....But good dark XD

Sorry for not reviewing the past few chapters, I need to go back and do so, these last few have been gold!

And this one!!

Wow I wasn't sure where it was going but then you went that far into the future, David's life would be a living breathing (smelling XD) Hell.

And I love the little tidbit at the end of the fact he'll eventually wind up on his Niece's foot. 

Like not even allowing him to die, they're gonna force him to live!

And I bet when his niece passed, he'll be put onto *her* granddaughter, and so on and so forth. His cruel and torturous existence never ending.

Great work on this chapter :D As you have been doing on all of these. 

Can't wait to read what happens next. 



Author's Response:

No need to apologise for not reviewing! I know there's probably a lot of silent watchers enjoying, although I do appreciate it. :)

Yeah I adore endings like this when I read stories haha. It's especially great when the cruelty is understated by other characters who just kinda find it funny.

Thanks for the review!

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