Reviews For Lovely Violet
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Reviewer: lightwing Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2023 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 7

Superwomen are awesome. Size changing is awesome. Together they're incredible.  The supreme power of the superwoman made even more extreme by the size difference.  I also like these types of "corruption" or "descent into evil" stories, especially when the heroine is technically not doing it herself.  It seems that glowing rock from the first chapter had a little side effect, turning the super heroine into a super villain.  And she's still getting stronger!

I guess I like the betrayal aspect of it, like "she's supposed to be a hero! Why is she doing this?" Or something like that.  The fact that everyone knew she was super when she was good and now realizing that there's nothing they can actually do to stop her now that she's bad is great.  I've read a comic "The Amazing Eighth Wonder" that did this too.

I wonder if you will have Violet eventually be cured/come to her senses and realize what she's done?  Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Hey, sorry for the late reply and thanks for the extensive review, Lightwing!

I have already written more chapters on my patreon page. And your review makes me realize that I failed to give enough attention to the concepts you're emphasizing. Violet becomes definitely more evil and destructive, but I could have done more with her character development revolving around the rock that made her evil.
Oh well. Good chance that I will write a similar story in the future one day.Thus, granting myself a second chance.

And a comic like that sounds great!

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