Date: June 09 2025 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Party Down
It's been a while since I last visited the site and it's nice to see how this story has grown, and it's sad to know that you had medical problems, I hope you are very well and that your health improves, I have really enjoyed seeing the changes and twists in the plot that you have devised since Kristen finding (forcing) love with a man in her class. I want to know more about this relationship, how you will advance the plot in it, that Ginny has a small city on her desk, a couple of lines about the coexistence between them is always welcome, Janelle and her cult of people is pure gold there, I like the subplots that you have strived to build, there are many secrets yet to be addressed, Anton and his participation in the shrinking and transportation to Kristen's world, I want to read that now, those lines about the couple in the micro room who are looking to hack Kirsten's internet network, the subtlety with which you have proposed it, I loved that it is going to happen, they are going to contact more giantesses, that events are developing that have made the culture of the Cities like sporting events, great addition. I wish you could talk more about the culture and society of the micro and nano people, their customs, and I'm already dreaming about how Milya, the lost astronaut, will enter the story. Will she be an inhabitant of the room? Will she be affected by transportation? Will she be Kirsten's height or will she be mega? And for the world, will she be Kirsten's equivalent? I want to read this now. You have great world building, one of the best stories on the site.
Author's Response:
Thanks for stopping by again! Yeah, my life is pretty much permanently changed and it's going to take a long time to get back to close to normal but thank you for the well wishes.
Yeah, lot's of plot changes and twists. I can try my best to talk more about the cultures of each city, I want to be more detailed when I think it could be useful. Oh yes, Milya, tje lost astronaut. I thought people forgot about her, but I do she could possibly make a reappearance for something.
I don't want to spoil anything though! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: May 24 2025 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Party Down
Another great chapter! I personally don't mind these generally peaceful chapters where there isn't a whole lot of destruction. The less things get destroyed, the longer things can last and the more the story can be prolonged, which I am definitely all for. :)
So Nyla finally received her long overdue and well-deserved comeuppance? This wasn't the way I was expecting it to happen, but to be honest I didn't know what to expect. First Anton got his, and now Nyla. I think this probably wraps it up for all the original tiny "villains". The only exception I can think off offhand is that unnamed Assassin who tried to kill Justyna a long time back. The city he was in (and several others) got obliterated, but that doesn't mean he himself got killed. Necessarily. Though even if he is still somehow alive, what potential harm could he be? Still it would be very interesting to revisit him and his fate.
Anyway, as for Nyla, even though she certainly didn't deserve it, the "tour of Ostrov" Kristen had considered for her sounded like an interesting idea. Too bad it won't ever happen now though. Ah well. :)
Frankly, if you ask me I think Nyla got off WAY too easy. After threatening to murder Kristen's daughter? Yes, I know it was a LONG time ago, but just for that alone, I'm surprised Kristen didn't devise some special punishment that would be very slow and agonizing. Instead she just got squished in an instant. The same fate Kristen inflicts on countless people even by accident all the time.
One good thing though is Kristen was able to limit the destruction JUST to Nyla inside of her tower so no one else had to die. That's a big improvement over how she had been in some recent chapters.
As for why she let Nyla's threat to kill Maddie slide all those years ago, its been a long time since I've read that part, but if I recall correctly, all the way back then she wasn't yet familiar with each leader of every city personally. She didn't know who Nyla was or who made that threat initially. I don't remember it ever being explicitly said that she found out it came from Nyla, though obviously in this chapter its clear she had worked it out it was her. But of course by then so much time had passed, so yeah... still, threatening your child is a big deal, so I dunno.
Your writing of Justyna's emotions and her dilemma is very good and feels very authentic. She is clearly a good woman and wants what is best for her people, but not everyone understands these tough choices she is forced to make, which is why she ends up facing assassination attempts, rebellions, and the like. These people want someone who would fight back against Kristen, but don't understand this would mean the death of Ostrov. Its definitely not ideal, but Justyna has managed to keep the country mostly alive. Its unlikely anyone else could have done as well of a job as she has, and most would probably have seen Ostrov ended up completely destroyed by now. Kristen is a brat and very tough to deal with. Justyna does as well at it as anyone possibly could. Doing so after the loss of Niko is especially tough. This takes a lot of strength.
As for the worshipers of Kristen's shoes, its completely understandable that she wants them gone. If I may make a suggestion, I hope they don't just simply get wiped out, but maybe Kristen could collect them and transplant them somewhere? Since they love Kristen's shoes so much, maybe they could found a new city inside her shoe closet? Or something like what Ginny did with her followers inside that Terrarium thing? Or place them into the Micro room and have them establish a new Nano city in there like I had suggested before at one point. Lots of potential things that could be done with them. I just hope they're not just wiped out summarily. Because good worshipers (ones that actually volunteer) like that are hard to come by. :)
As for those shoe-cleaners in Braithe, its good for them that Nyla's tyranny has ended, and now they can get proper equipment and medical care. Still though, with all those "criminals" that Kristen is having rounded up and imprisoned, maybe some of them could be punished by being forced to clean her shoes as hard labor? If she has a really grueling task and wants it done in a hurry and the volunteers alone aren't up for it, then these "bad people" can be put to work. And I have "bad people" in quotations because we all know that even with the best of intentions mistakes will happen, and that definition of "bad" will be stretched a lot. Kristen can be quite arbitrary sometimes, you know. :)
Oh yeah, and it was good to hear from Leslie again in this chapter. I wonder if she'll ever stop by again to check in on those "toy people"? That would definitely be fun, but maybe TOO fun. ;) Though I would love to see what she would have to say about her bootprints left a permanent impression in Ostrov, and how they're still there all these years later. And how one of the Micro cities has been renamed "Port Leslie" in honor of her. I wonder how she would feel about these things. Though she certainly was very dominant and VERY destructive, she didn't seem to get any special enjoyment out of it the way Kristen, Ginny, and now Janelle have. But she is good at being bossy and domineering nonetheless. Like she said herself, she could sort out those "toy people" by lunch. :)
Kristen could put that bold claim to the test by letting Leslie work her magic. But as with the first time, it would probably be hugely destructive. But just letting Leslie take home a few thousand "volunteers" would mean things wouldn't get too crazy, and then Leslie could prove what she is capable of by whipping those "volunteers" into shape like she said. That would be pretty fun in any case, and Leslie could just keep them as her own city like what Ginny is doing. She might not care about playing around with "toy people" like the other girls, but maybe they can be of use to her for her work related stuff somehow?
Anyway, those are my thoughts. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I think Nyla's death was overdue, but I wanted to extend her story for a long time because of how corrupted she was and I thought it would make a good arc. However, should she have died in a more cruel way? Maybe, but I think current Kristen is trying to make active strive to being a better person and ruler, so I'm not sure.
Justyna is my favorite character to write because she feels like the most real character to write in this situation, all of her emotions and intelligence conflict really well in this situation against a giant brat who's 35 years old.
Leslie still could make an appearance, she's more like the devil on the shoulder type of voice to influence Kristen but she could always make that comeback, but it would probably mean a lot of people dying.
Date: May 23 2025 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Party Down
I hope to see Maddy interacting with the 1/200000 tiny people in the future. And I have an idea: giantess could have the 1/200000 tiny army give her a foot massage.
Author's Response: In the future!
[Report This]Date: May 07 2025 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Party Down
Was waiting for this
Author's Response:
Hope it was worth the wait lol
[Report This]Date: April 28 2025 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Interlude IV
This story does one of the best jobs I've seen about telling a long term story in a giantess scenario. From the beginning we've known that there is a sort of deadline for the tinies on when Kristen allows Maddie to see and interact with the tinies. Whenever that happens odds are not great that it will go well for the tinies and/or Kristen. Maddie might destroy everything not realizing the implications or, she might show more empathy than her mother and hate her mother. The odds of a positive outcome for all are very low. The older Maddie gets in the story the more and more the tension seems to build for the tinies and for Kristen herself to continue keeping Maddie out of the room.
Kristen's way of coping with the situation taught to her by Leslie was never to be ethical but to manage her life around being cruel and unfair to the tinies. She seems to have good in her but its always been easier to be selfish. The fact she's so paniced about pregnancy seems to imply she still has some compassion in her and might've been hoping the situation would work itself off when the population died off in her rooms and now has to cope with the fact that it wont end until she ends it herself or finds someone else to take over.
Well done all around from a story/ plot perspective and with the smut aspects.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I think you nailed it. There is an approaching deadline and I think Kristen's worry and stress is only going to get worse because of it. The way you describe how she copes with this situation is exactly what I've had in mind. Kristen does have good in her, but it is easier for her to be selfish because that means she doesn't have to put effort into solving as many problems.
[Report This]Date: March 20 2025 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Interlude IV
There was not so much action in this interlude chapter, but it was very good on the exposition, and it helps to move the plot along in the direction you want it to go, I'm sure.
Justyna's thought that Niko may have survived within the wrinkles of Kristen's feet was a thought that also did occur to me after reading the previous chapter. Sending search and rescue teams to scour Kristen's feet would be the way to go, but as she and Justyna are not on speaking terms, it would be difficult to pull that off. Though, organizing such an operation without Kristen's consent might work, though there are extremely vast distances involved (for them) to even reach her. But its not like Kristen would detect them. It would be a very hazardous operation and likely to fail, but Kristen would never even know so she wouldn't get angered about it. Since Kristen moves around and might be hard to catch up with, the best option might be for the teams to find her shoes that she is going to wear in the near future, and set up camp there, and let her come to them. That's an idea anyway.
Being so small they have an edge over the micros in being much more difficult to squish. I remember doing the calculations before, and I figured them out to be about the size of a bacterium in comparison. So Kristen's skin ridges would be like an immense valley to them, and many of them could have survived there, including Niko. This is a thought I've had ever since that one chapter way back where Ginny squished the cities with her nylon-clad toes to eliminate the criminals that tried to assassinate Justyna. Many people may have survived in Ginny nylons or her own toe ridges. Maybe they still live there even now. :) Its a very fun idea if you ask me. Ironically, the criminals that tried to kill Justyna could be among the survivors. Who knows? And let's not forget poor Luka and the others who got trapped inside of her ass. ;)
The glass dome thing at the end to keep Ginny's followers in was a good idea! I know Ginny is Korean and not Japanese, but them becoming a decoration on her desk kinda reminds me of Bonsai trees. In fact, in the dome is big enough, she could have one in there with them. It would be a cool place to live, and it would also give Ginny something to look into and contemplate, just like a terrarium or something. I dunno.
The same could also be done with Nano cities from Ostrov. I hope sooner or later Ginny gets her own Nano city of followers (whether consensually or not) to rule over as a goddess. Perhaps Janelle too and maybe others. :) I mean, before it all ends up being destroyed by Kristen and her pettiness like she did with Kudileyka and so on. At least being within a glass dome would give them some measure of protection, right? It also makes a convenient way to pass them along as gifts. ;)
Speaking of gifts, I'm glad to see that Parker is taking well to her new position of ruling the realm of Crest she had been gifted. The videos on Anton's computer are extremely interesting. It is also kinda amazing how this place is paradoxically both so scientifically advanced in comparison to the other micro cities, yet at the same time also feels medieval and backwards in many other respects. But that stuff about the scientists researching into the storm that brought them there is very interesting. I had always imagined in my head since I first started reading this story that the various cities (and Ostrov) would make this sort of research a top priority, but I had no idea how successful any of them would be at it. From what the videos imply, it seems Crest was getting close to a break through, but Anton being Anton didn't want to go back. Maybe his selfishness, insanity, or fetishism ended up dooming everyone to slavery and death? Who knows if the science can ever recover from the set back caused by him suppressing it and killing those scientists. But it is very interesting...
Alternately, if the science could be properly understood and harnessed, maybe Kristen and co. could use it to bring in MORE Cities/countries. That would be one way to solve the dilemma of this ever dwindling resource. Especially if they're not being allowed to reproduce. I think Kristen enjoys her power and would love to bring in more "recruits" if she could. There's also the thing where everyone's gotten used to her and been broken by her. If some new "additions" were to arrive, these would have a sort of defiance which her old subjects now lack (because she killed off all the defiant ones). But I understand if that's not a direction you want to go.
One final thing I want to say about Anton while I'm on this topic... when I first read this story I kinda had a feeling that he was behind this somehow, because he seemed to be the only tiny (or the only anyone at first) to be happy about this change. So that made me think he had done it or was in on it somehow. I now see that is not the case. Nonetheless, even if he didn't cause this to happen, he sure did not want it to be undone.
And btw, it was also good to read that flashback with Samantha and Werth to that war against Crest back in the early days and it happened. That shed some valuable insight from the perspective of the tinies, which the story originally didn't have in those chapters. So kudos on that. I know you said you don't like to write from the perspective of the tinies but I think this added a lot.
Werth's rationale made sense. Anton's desire to be enslaved and worship Kristen as a Goddess was a dangerous idea, and maybe all the Micros would be better off had he succeeded in nipping that in the bud before the cult had grown and expanded like it has, and also before it had gotten to Kristen's head and inflated her ego to megalomania, again like it has.
Anton may be dead and gone, but his legacy and this cult he created still very much continues. It started out with one man, and now there are millions.
[Report This]Date: March 18 2025 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
Awesome chapter! Nicely done!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: March 15 2025 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Interlude IV
So happy to see update of this fantastic story
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: March 13 2025 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Interlude IV
Given the fact that this story has reached the top 10 longest stories list on the site now I am curious as to how much left is there to go (if you have planned out the rest of the story up to its ending) :)
Author's Response: Damn, that wasn't even my intention for it to be this long. It's just fun to write. I know I will probably need at least 50 chapters total, we'll see how much extra there will be lol
Date: February 19 2025 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
Also, having Kristen destroy an entire city with her nipple just because 1 guy didn't vote for it seems really extreme to me. He obviously couldn't represent the thousands of people that died under her nipple. But I suppose she is quite used to just killing of so many people without much thought. I think that would be a chilling start to a holiday for the rest of the tinies, who have to live in fear under her dominion. I could see them being more scared then joyous.
Author's Response:
Yeah, she's not the most rational person, she's drifted beyond seeing the tinies as people with the occasional hopeful moment. It would be a very chilling start to a holiday, and we will see how they handle it.
[Report This]Date: February 17 2025 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Facades Part 2
Things are starting to heat up! You’ve really stepped up the creativity in terms of the characters and micro cities, both of which have evolved so much since the story began. The all-men and all-women cities can be interesting places to explore over time and I like how Ostrov was both literally and ideologically split in two by Kristen’s destructive actions.
While Kristen has been exceptionally cruel towards her people at times, I like how you’ve teased introducing even more destructive giantesses into the story, like Nina and Valerie, not to mention what Ginny and Janelle have planned together.
The reveal with Justyna was a real gut punch. It was something I didn’t expect, but the perfect direction to take her story. I’m team Justyna all the way, though realistically, I don’t see how someone that small could ever hope to stand up against Kristen, even with the most advanced military weaponry. Can Ostrov, Justyna and her child truly be saved?
Of all the characters, Cameron and Parker are definitely the most relatable. They seem like the closest thing to heroes in the story (disregarding Parker’s actions in Ostrov of course). However, given her obsession with Kristen and new rule over Crest, Parker may end up becoming the next Anton. I’m excited to see how Cameron and Parker’s relationship develops.
I’m usually not one to offer suggestions, but if there’s one interaction that I’d like to see from The Incident series that hasn’t been done before, it’s nanos being smuggled into the micro cities. I’m sure women like Nyla, Samantha or even Parker could make good use of them :)
Your commitment to writing despite facing health challenges is really inspiring. Wishing you luck on your recovery!
Author's Response:
Heating up indeed. Thank you for the compliments about the evolution in creativity. That means a lot. I can't wait to explore the diverse ideologies like the division between West and East a little more in these interlude type stories I'm working on.
Yeah, Justyna has been through a lot and she knows there's not much she can actually do, but we could at least see her try.
Yeah nanos into the micro cities could happen still, I thought about it but I don't want to give it away, but I'm not quite sure how I would do it just yet.
Thank you for the well wishes!
Date: February 17 2025 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Facades Part 2
You mean all this time you haven't been writing what you really want to write?
You've been hinting a lot about Maddy, is that it? Maddy as a pre-teen or teen interacting with the cities?
Author's Response:
No, I'm still writing what I want to write, I think I'm just trying to say that I really want to have the dynamic of Kristen and an of age Madelyn are the forefront and really get into why I wanted to write this story in the first place.
Date: February 16 2025 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Facades Part 2
I am so fascinating in these new stories, could you please make more session like urine or fart parts?
Author's Response:
Thank you and maybe lol
[Report This]Date: February 15 2025 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
What an excellent chapter!! I especially liked the part where Anton didn't get what he wanted and was crushed by Ginny (the false prophet) instead of Kristen. I hope your recovery continues in a positive direction. Just wanted to say that I really enjoy all your stories and look forward to when any of them are updated.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm familiar with your works so it means a lot. Anton getting punished that way was so satisfying to write. Thank you so much, it means a lot that people are reading my other works and loving them just as much.
[Report This]Date: February 15 2025 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Facades Part 2
So happy to see an update on this story. I'm sorry for your hope you gonna get better soon. And as always i can't wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! Looking forward to posting it.
Date: February 14 2025 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
Thank you for your reply. I did a calculation: the first race is 1/10,000 the size of a human, and the second race is 1/200,000 the size of a human.
Date: February 14 2025 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Facades Part 2
Wow! This chapter was really full of some great moments! But ESPECIALLY the very last scene. I think I’ve said it before but I’ll say it again, I really really really love when Kristen exerts her power over the cities, especially when it’s for petty reasons like there at the end. As well as the voting for the party/holiday scene in this chapter as well. Definitely continues to be one of my favorite stories and I’m always awaiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! The last scene was hard to write because it hurts... Kristen being petty and exerting her power is her specialty and barely anybody is going to tell her that it might be wrong. Expect for Janelle, but gently, calling out how it was weird to kill off a whole city like that for a unjustifiable reason. Thank you for stopping by and calling this one of your favorites!
[Report This]Date: February 14 2025 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Facades Part 2
Wow, you weren't kidding. That was a long one, but it was worth the wait (even though it really wasn't a long wait). I don't know how you continue to keep a steady pace despite all your obstacles, yet you do.
Great action here. I really didn't expect Kristen to have that reaction at the end, but honestly I'm here for it. The little ones need to know their place, literally. And the devious creativity coming from her (you) never disappoints.
I loved the dynamic between Ginny and Janelle, and I'm real excited to see where that goes. I think you do a real good job of making your chapters feel self-contained in a satisfying way. I'm not sure if I'm saying that right but what I mean is that it felt like a lot happened, but at the same time there is a lot of stuff in there hinting at what's to come without feeling predictable or leaving it on big, unsatisfying cliff-hangers.
It still feels like there is a lot of potential left, but from here after time moves forward we don't really know what's going to happen and I guess that helps me feel engaged and wondering where it will all lead to. I like that Rasha is still in the picture and of course wonder where that will lead. And I can't help but wonder any time drinking comes up if Kristin will change her ways yet again, and what that could lead to if so.
Also, I love Drunk Ginny XD. Probably just my opinion here, but I would love to see a chapter where Kristen lets Ginny and Janelle get to go crazy with each other in one of the rooms, maybe something like the "Adult Supervision" chapter meets the Lacy and Kiyoko chapter of Grove View Apartments. But I know at this point in the story it's probably not feasible with what you have planned (also because of the whole tinies essenialy being finite resource). And I'm cool with that because I know you know what you're doing, so really I'm just daydreaming out loud here, haha..
Anyways I've got to applaud you for doing this all with your voice. That's insane, but clearly hasn't stopped you and I hope that one day soon this is all in the past. Peace ✌️
Author's Response:
I wish it was just a slightly more steady pace, but unfortunately so much of my time now is doing exercises and rehabs and recovering from procedures and it sucks.
But I'm glad people seem to be liking the action and drama even if there is a lot of it. I think at the end, Kristen had that reaction because Justyna saying that she was pregnant made everything feel more human, an experience that Kristen had gone through with Madelyn as Kristen's anger thinking that these people are almost nothing in comparison to her except for pets that can talk and need to be told what to do.
Yeah, I still want Rasha in the story for some interactions but I don't think her character is going to become as important as Madelyn's future development. Also yeah, Kristen might experience challenges with drinking and stuff still.
Than you for your feedback! It's much appreciated.
[Report This]Date: February 13 2025 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Facades Part 2
I've been following this story for some time and I must say, it's so well written. I absolutely despise Kristen and if she ever gets what she deserves, I know it'll be an extremely cathartic chapter. Justyna is my favorite, and with the new twists this chapter, I'm very interested to see what becomes of her.
Question, how long do you plan this story to be? I'm just curious... Sorry to hear that you're in pain. Wishing you a speedy recovery!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! You know I'm a big fan of your work as well so it means a lot.
I write Kristen to be hated mostly on purpose, a character that is a hypocrite but very human at the same time, she loves the fantasy of saying she going to change and do better like so many people do in real life. She gets to pat herself on the back because she makes attempts to do better, but honestly will never full admit that she enjoys the power and control she has, then can play victim sometimes or gets all frustrated when she get challenged by people she doesn't quite respect all the way as much as she unfairly idolizes herself.
Justyna is going to be fun to write and she is actually one of my favorite characters I've made I think.
I really want another 20-30 chapters at the very most, because I want to write Madelyn's story and how she's going to fall into this world her mom is setting up for her. Also thank you for the recovery wishes! It's been a journey.
[Report This]Date: February 13 2025 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
Damn, after reading the latest chapter I hope that Kristen does get a taste of her own medicine, whether it be through a dream or maybe pictures of the destruction and lives she took out of sheer spite. Like videos of people’s last moments or something.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Kristen isn't a great person and I'm writing her that way on purpose. She has absolute power and knows that, she likes it even if she doesn't fully admit it. Getting a taste of her own medicine could be something a long time coming by the end of the story.