[Report This]Date: May 02 2022 11:25 PM Title: Duchess and Giantess 4-7
Fantastic. There are a lot of reviews I'd like to give on some of the stories/new additions you've written, but I've been too busy for a little bit to do so. I will get to giving a lot of my feedback(especially my thoughts on "A New Queen") as I make my way through your remarkable catalogue and finish what has been sucking my time.
This was my favorite part of the whole set. The line that solidified its greatness in my mind was the insurance bit. That was just grade A comedy. I loved the interactions between the duchess and the giantess. A usually dominant girl discovering that she likes being submissive to the giantess is amazing. I'd love to see both sides of that explored with the giantess being shrunk down and being used by the duchess and the elf and of course the duchess being the 'pet in the sheets'. The miscommunication between characters about the fatality of being eaten as one character is going to be eaten is something you've done a couple of times, but this one was the funniest because of the instant attack by the duchess. I hope you do expand upon it.
I don't know if you remember that I mentioned I was writing a slice of life style story inspired a bit by your style. But, I released it about a week ago, I don't know if you can see any of your influences yet, but when the two get to playing together there are some ideas that are absolutely inspired by your stories. Obviously, you don't have to read it, but if you do, I'd love to know what you think.
https://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=11746
Author's Response:
I went ahead and checked your story out and left a review on it!
Anyways yeah I had plans for the Duchess-Giantess greentext story thing but I wanted to transition over to full stories and I kind of dropped it, I think the characters would make a good full story but I've got a lot of them ongoing already.