Date: August 08 2013 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like the story. I hope you put a new chapter up soon.
Author's Response:
I've never forgotten about this series and I really want to build on it. I find it easier to knock out a one-off, pouncing on other ideas that drift through my head, but that's no excuse to neglect a series.
Date: February 20 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely great idea of having the shrunken man be able to still protect his girlfriend from even the most horrifying threats. This chapter was very nice to read, the whole attempted rape thing felt really intense.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad the intensity came through. The scene was very clear, I just wanted to relate what I was feeling in that passage.
[Report This]Date: November 18 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
-"like a flying skyscraper or something like that."
Nice imagery!
Date: February 12 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Makes a nice change. Normally in these stories the woman is only to happy so I really like hte realism.
Date: October 24 2009 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is one of my favorite stories. I hope you are continuing it. :)
Author's Response:
I fully plan to. Sorry it's been over five years! I should just sit down and knock out the outline... you know, I'm going to do that now.
[Report This]Date: June 02 2009 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad to see you continuing this. It's got one of the best lampshade-hangs I've seen, and it is superb so far. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you kindly. I wondered if it was moving too slow for people's liking, but I was interested in seeing what the characters would do. I also really like Johnny Dangerously, but there was a time (when this was written) when Comedy Central was playing it way too often.
Thank you for teaching me the term "lampshade hanging," too.