Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 3

The bit about hte remot undermountain laboratory shocked me. I really wan't expecting that. You should have mentioned it before.

Author's Response:

It surprised me too. I was freeforming the concepts of the story, but I shouldn't have messed with it too much or else it just becomes jarring.