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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2012 9:21 AM Title: Bitter Reunion

Heh! I guess "needlessly" and "paranoid" aren't always synonymous.

Reviewer: DrManhattan Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2009 5:12 PM Title: Bitter Reunion

hightmares: ironic typo or freudian slip?

I echo the sentiment about emotional realism other reviewers have related to this chapter.  Bobby's tension really seeps through the writing from start to finish.

I like how Kim not only always seems to know what Bobby's thinking, but also finds a way to get it out of him as well.  It creates a very unique dynamic between them.  She raised some pretty good points in this chapter, too.  One in particular I've been wondering about since the end of the original story...

And another epic cliffhanger to end the chapter, damn you!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2009 10:14 AM Title: Bitter Reunion

To paraphrase an old saying: "Even paranoids have the right to be right, once in a while."

In other words: good job with the emotional realism. :-)

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