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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2012 9:26 AM Title: Shadows of the past

It strikes me that Bobby's premonition about Jack might have been due to body language. Something in the way he moved, or the tone of his voice, might have reminded Bobby of Andy (or even Dan!).

Reviewer: DrManhattan Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2009 8:43 PM Title: Shadows of the past

You know, it's kinda nice to see Bobby's paranoia validated.  Yeah, I feel bad for Jen, getting duped into a date with that jerk, but this issue has been weighing on Bobby for most of the story.  It would have been a little pathetic if he was worrying all this time for nothing.

As for Jack, it sounds like he tried to make his play too quick.  He should have done the friend thing for awhile and attempted to get a read on the strength of her current relationship before getting "touchy" with Jen.  Maybe he was suffering from a case of ostrich syndrome?  Or maybe he had an alterior motive.

It's nice to see things looking up for Bobby for once.  Of course, I have my doubts that date promised at the end of the chapter is going to go as planned...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2009 9:26 PM Title: Shadows of the past

Hmmmmm! Andy is out on probation, with a restraining order. A month later, another old flame of Jen's shows up who all but tries to force-feed her some chocolate candy.

An alliance of convenience between two egotistical ex-boyfriends? With magically spiked candies as a secret weapon? Interesting sub-plot!*

*Assuming I'm right.

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