[Report This]Date: April 20 2023 9:52 PM Title: Dan’s Tiny Dilemma (In development)
Hey Shrinker82!
I already put in my vote a while ago so no need to count this as a vote. Seeing this update just made me appreciate these story options you have and I am hoping that one day you consider to make this chapter: Dan’s Tiny Dilemma. It still seems great after all this time so yeah. That’s all.
Have a great day!
Author's Response:
Hey TomSpeedy,
Good to hear from ya. I can 100% affirm that everything I’ve previewed will one day be posted (once I get them written, that is). There are several other projects I’m working on before that, including Little, Big Brother (which is my next novel); a couple of one-off stories, including the alternate giantess chapter for Babysitter Trouble; and finishing up Tim’s Tiny Week. Dan’s Tiny Dilemma is one that I honestly can’t wait to start writing and am already working on outlining; unfortunately, it just might be a couple of years before I start posting that one, but rest assured, it’s going to get written.
In the meantime, I really hope you’ve been keeping up with Tim’s Tiny Week. I know it may not be everyone’s cup of tea, but I’m sure there are a couple of chapters in there that are right up your alley, including at least one that’ll be posted starting next week (I think you mentioned you like tinies being taped to someone’s foot).
Always good to hear from you. Keep reading and sending in your reviews. They’re some of my favorites!
Date: November 27 2022 7:55 AM Title: Dan’s Tiny Dilemma (In development)
Looks promising! When will we get thee draft of the new story?
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: June 28 2022 7:36 PM Title: Dan’s Tiny Dilemma (In development)
Ch. 3 was once again extremely well-written.
Nevertheless, a MILILF (mom in law id like...) with a dominant (assertive & teasing, not cruel & punishing) with a foot-focus (and the wife/daughter adding possibilities for a twist or two)is absolutely my top preference.
You put it very well yourself: "perhaps I can adjust Diane’s personality so that she becomes more playful and more dominant the smaller Dan gets, with a more natural evolution of her personality. This actually would make her character feel more realistic and gives me the chance to improve my character-development skills.".
Author's Response: Well, while I DON’T want Diane to be simply “cartoonishly evil”, I DO want her to become more playful and dominant, potentially even resentful, the smaller Dan shrinks.
Date: June 28 2022 2:33 PM Title: Dan’s Tiny Dilemma (In development)
I would definitely vote for 2, would like to see the relationship between Noah’s sister and his cousin, and his aunt.
Author's Response:
Yes, the family relationships are going to be the focus of this story, particularly with Noah and his sister, but he’ll also have unique interactions and relationships with his mother, aunt, and cousin.
Now, since most of the overall interactions are going to be between family members, they are going to be less sexualized and more playful and teasing in nature. However, I also understand that some readers do like more “intimate” scenes, so rather than going the whole incest route, I’m also going to interweave some of his sister’s friends to facilitate this.
I’ll tally your vote for Story 2!
Date: June 28 2022 1:17 PM Title: Dan’s Tiny Dilemma (In development)
Slow diminishment and step monther is always a nice combo ;-) Diane personality is perfect!
Author's Response:
Well, she’s not Dan’s stepmother, she’s the mother-in-law, but I can certainly see how she would become a “step-mother”.
I’ll tack on another vote for Chapter 1!
Date: June 22 2022 10:25 PM Title: Dan’s Tiny Dilemma (In development)
I like the idea of this. My only problem is that this kind of story often falls into the pitfall of the mother in law being cartoonishly cruel. I think a good solution for this is to have the mother-in-law be aroused by the situation and be dominating, but not cruel, towards our main character.
Author's Response:
I understand your concern; these stories tend to lean on the crueler side of things, which is also where I’m trending.
The obviously dominant one in this story is going to be Dan’s Mother-in-law, who tends to dote upon her daughter, with Dan’s wife being on the gentler side, but perhaps I can adjust Diane’s personality so that she becomes more playful and more dominant the smaller Dan gets, with a more natural evolution of her personality. This actually would make her character feel more realistic and gives me the chance to improve my character-development skills.
I’m going to take some time to think on this. For now, I’ll assume your vote is for Chapter 1.
Date: June 22 2022 12:16 PM Title: Dan’s Tiny Dilemma (In development)
Definitely a fan of the second option, as seen in my own works. So hopefully it's the one you go with.
Author's Response:
Alright, I’ll add a vote for Chapter 2!
Date: June 22 2022 12:08 PM Title: Dan’s Tiny Dilemma (In development)
Hi Shrinker82.
I’ve been a lurker for a longer time then I’ve been a writer, but I have to say that I’m a fan of your work. I hope the best for you during these trying times as life can feel like a bunch of hills, valleys, and detours. As for which story I prefer, I’m feeling an affinity for Dan’s Tiny Dilemma. Both stories seem to offer verbal humiliation and power dynamics, but with different age dynamics and social positions.
This first story the obviously dominant one in this relationship is your Mother-in-law, with your wife possibly being on the gentler side. However, we don’t really know that with the information given from this small preview. What was hinted at by this preview was a chance for unaware scenario with stakes by the main character asserting that he has to find a way out even if he ends up small enough to be squashed underneath his mother-in-law’s sole.
The second story’s preview places the sadistic role in your sister and cousin closer to the main character’s age group with the parents seemingly on the gentler side. Promise of unaware scenes, verbal humiliation, and power abuse are present in this one just like the former choice.
Thus, my preference is one that is born out of a difference of tastes. I prefer the first story over the second. The mother-in-law, possibly doting towards her daughter and having formed a concrete view of the world, is less likely to turn over a new leaf as the girls in the second story would. A femdom size change story with an intellectual antagonist is much more in my lane of interests.
I would like to close my comment with a wish for you to have a swell day and weeks to come.
Author's Response:
You’ve pretty much hit the nail on the head: Both stories will involve a slow shrinking scenario with a dominant, female character(s), but each one offers its own specific dynamic.
Each one will start out somewhat similarly, but the former will down a path of offering more sexually explicit content than the latter, which will be more playful and less explicit. However, in the end, I want both stories to involve something from my favorite shrinking tropes
Nonetheless, I’ll tack on another vote for Dan’s Tiny Dilemma.
[Report This]Date: June 22 2022 6:34 AM Title: Dan’s Tiny Dilemma (In development)
Shrinker82! Long time no see! Just ready your story summary and heard what happened to you. I had no idea you were going through that. I will definitely check out that deviant art content you got since I think you had some amazing stuff on there earlier so I’m excited to see what’s new.
Now for these stories. Both are pretty interesting.
The second one had some good unaware scenes and it’s interesting to see how he deals with his giantess family members.
However, the first one completely impressed me. I was shocked at how good your writing was. I mean, that dialogue from Diane was 10/10! Her words were seducing me. If that was just a sample of what her dynamic will be with Diane, then sign me up to read the rest of it. My goodness, that was fun to read.
Oh and the way she teased the future about having him please her in other ways. I truly wish I was in Dan’s position. Wow.
I’m sure both stories will do great, but wow “Dan’s tiny dilemma” takes my vote. That was amazing.
I can’t wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Nice to hear from you again; thanks for the kind words.
I’ve wanted to explore the whole domineering mother-in-law trope, along with the “slow shrink” story for a while now as well, and this story will give me a chance to do both. This particular story was inspired by a chapter from “Excerpts from John’s Life”, and I’m excited to explore what I can do with it. There’ll be a lot of juicy interactions in this story that I’m quite sure you’re going to enjoy, along with a good practice story in my “Scenario Series” that I’ll be working on first.
So, one more vote for Chapter 1!
Author's Response:
Nice to hear from you again; thanks for the kind words.
I’ve wanted to explore the whole domineering mother-in-law trope, along with the “slow shrink” story for a while now as well, and this story will give me a chance to do both. This particular story was inspired by a chapter from “Excerpts from John’s Life”, and I’m excited to explore what I can do with it. There’ll be a lot of juicy interactions in this story that I’m quite sure you’re going to enjoy, along with a good practice story in my “Scenario Series” that I’ll be working on first.
So, one more vote for Chapter 1!
Date: June 22 2022 2:42 AM Title: Dan’s Tiny Dilemma (In development)
Been following you for a long time and have always looked forward to your releases. That being said, I think that the second story suits your style better. Someone else mentioned that unaware can become less engaging, but I think that having the girls aware or even controlling Noah’s antics with his aunt blends both unaware and aware content well. I also think that this story could open more doors than the first. Regardless of which one you pick, I’d love to see some ass scenes!
Author's Response:
Oh, there’ll definitely be some ass scenes…among other risk-ay interactions.
So, another vote for Chapter 2!
[Report This]Date: June 21 2022 6:50 PM Title: Dan’s Tiny Dilemma (In development)
Diane's dominance is amazing and the combo of continuous shrinking, foot play, and a femdom mom-in-law is incredible. Really evocative of an Andrea Untamed or Erotic Nikki roleplay scenario.
Hope to see this story continue and the MIL revel in his destiny of being a speck subservient to her soles and toes!
Author's Response:
That’s exactly the dynamic I’m going for: think of it as a combination of “The Incredible Shrinking Man” with a few added twists. This scene (and the overall story) was inspired by chapter 3 of “Excerpts form John’s Life” by Crocodile; I’ve wanted to explore and expand on the trope of the domineering mother-in-law for a while now. As Dan gets smaller, her attitude towards him becomes more and more dismissive, seeing him as nothing more than a burden to her daughter…and a plaything for herself.