[Report This]Date: July 10 2023 4:36 AM Title: Chapter One, Heaven
Man I’m loving this series, seriously hope though that they stick together and he either gets over junis darkside when he discovers it and doesn’t break up with her, cause that’d be a cliche at this point
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your support!! I'm so glad you're liking the story and their relationship. It should absolutely be a climactic moment in their relationship either way!
[Report This]Date: September 02 2022 4:25 PM Title: Chapter One, Heaven
I want to know what happens when a tiny person is killed or injured. It all sounds like it's no big deal, but then again there are designated zones and all that. It basically screams "show don't tell". Can't wait for something to go wrong.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!! You shouldn’t have to wait tooo long, some intense things are coming that will absolutely answer your question :)
[Report This]Date: August 19 2022 8:19 PM Title: Chapter One, Heaven
I loved the details of part 3 of the story, I could feel the suffering of the little one. It reminded me of kenny 224 Underfoot Railroad story haha r03;r03;I hope it continues soon
Author's Response:
Thank you, that chapter was so fun to write! But I feel bad for tinies sometimes, especially ones that can't seem to catch a break lol. I will be continuing regularly with chapters coming out every couple of weeks!
[Report This]Date: July 27 2022 8:12 AM Title: Chapter One, Heaven
Honestly, the strongest parts of this story seem to be the character + dialogue. You’ve nailed the relationship dynamic perfectly, it’s honestly wonderful. Of course it’s a narrative so some people will actively seek out more ‘out there’ and quirky relationships. But it’s refreshing seeing something like this, done so well.
As for the weakest part of this story, it would be the general description. It isn’t bad by any means, but I honestly think you could land such a better story and following if there was more of it and it were polished. This part isn’t easy and honesty could be a criticism of most authors. But I can’t help but point out when I see someone so close to perfection. Keep writing and practicing. This is great!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for that honest review! I’m very glad the dialogue and characterization are strong points, they seem to come more naturally to me. As for the descriptions, I appreciate the feedback and I hope to incorporate it soon. Thanks for reading and more detailed chapters are to come :)
[Report This]Date: July 25 2022 9:31 PM Title: Chapter One, Heaven
Micah and Juni are such a cute couple and share a very tender relationship. Kind and caring but there's also room for some teasing, as Juni demonstrated.
And despite there differences in size there's no real sense of Micah or Juni being superior over the other. They treat each other as equals for the most part which i find just sweet.
A wonderful story overall.
Author's Response:
Thank you for a wonderful review!! I'm so happy you're enjoying their relationship. Making sure Micha and Juni really felt like a couple instead of just a big and a tiny was one of my main goals. I hope you enjoy the story as it unfolds :)